Stylistic Characteristics of Practical English and Its Translation

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• Stylistic Characteristics of Practical English
  and Its Translation
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• 2006.6.21

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• ?.???????????
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• 1. ??????
• 2. ?????
• 3. ??????
• ??????????????????????????, ??????

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• 1. ??????????
• ???????????????
• ?????,(2)?????
  ????????????????????????????????????????????(???
  ,1998297)?

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• 2. ???????
• ?????????? (Martin Joos)
  ,????????????
• ???(frozen style) ????(formal
  style)????(consultative style)????(casual
  style)????(intimate style)????

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• 3?????????????
• ???????(???)????
• (????) ???????????
• ??? ?????????????
• ?????????????? ??????? (6)????????????????
  ?

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1).?????????????

• (1). ??????
• ? ???,??? platen press??????,
  ???? blister packing machine,???foam??????bliste
  r????

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• (2). ??????????
• ???????????????
• ????,????????????
• ??????????????????
• ??????????????????
• ??-???-????????????
• ??????????????????
• ????????????, ?????
• ?????

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• (3). ?????????????
• ?.?????
• ???????????????????,???????????
• ?Roentgen rays?X-rays?
• ?expressway?freeway,milestone,
• kilometer stone ?land stone?

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• ???????
• ????????????
• a). ??????????,???????????????????esthetics,nego
  tiation (negotiable)
• b).???????? ???????????cell---tankelectrode---
  welding rod ?
• c).?????????????????,????????roller

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• ? ????????????????
• ?????, (A)????
• ?(1)??????
• (A) investigation of bidding qualification
• ( B ) prequalification (prequalifying)
• ?(2)(????)???
• (A) co-operating unit
• ( B ) joint venture
• ?(3)??????
• (A) On-the-spot cleaning equipment
• (B) CIP apparatus
• ?(4)?????????
• (A)Further Processing of Yangxicai Marine Alga
• (B)Further Processing of Hijiki

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• ?(5)??????????
• (A) China No.1 Automobile Group Company
• (B) China FAW Group Corporation
• ?(6)?? (????)
• (A) Weizi
• (B) Vizi (??????) ? Vitz (???????) ?Yaris
  (???????)
• ?(7)??????????????
• (A) Sewage Disposal standard for urban and rural
  Treatment Plant
• (B) Discharge Standard of Pollutants for
  Municipal Wastewater Treatment Plant

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2). ??????????

• (1)????????????????
• ??????????,?????????????????????????(A
  nglo-Saxon words)????????big words?
• ?.?????,????????????? ??????????????
• ?.???????????????????
• ?.????????????????

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(2)?????????????????

• ?While the principle of this invention has been
  described with particularity, it should be
  understood that various alternations and
  modifications can be made without departing from
  the spirit of the invention, the scope of which
  is defined by the appended claims.
• (??????????????????????????????,?????????????????
  ????????????????????????)

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• ??????????????????
• All payments made by the BUYER prior to delivery
  of the vessel shall be in the nature of an
  advance to the SELLER, and in the event this
  Contract is rescinded or cancelled by the BUYER,
  all in accordance with the specific terms of this
  Contract permitting such rescission or
  cancellation, the SELLER shall refund to the
  Buyer in United States Dollars the full amount of
  all sums already paid by the BUYER to the SELLER
  under the contract, together with interest...
• (????????????????????????????????????????,???????
  ??????????????????????????????,???????????????????
  ???????, ??????)

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(3). ????????????????

• a). ?????? (???????????)
• Boeing has been the premier manufacturer of
  commercial jetliners for more than 40 years. With
  the merger of Boeing and McDonnell Douglas in
  1997, Boeing's legacy of leadership in commercial
  jets, joined with the lineage of Douglas
  airplanes, gives the combined company a 70-year
  heritage of leadership in commercial aviation.
  ... Through Boeing Commercial Aviation Services,
  the company provides unsurpassed,
  around-the-clock technical support to help
  operators maintain their airplanes in peak
  operating condition.
• b). ??ARCON????????????
• (???)

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• (4) ?????????????
• ????, ??????????????????????????????????????????
  ?????????????????????????????(??2005???????????
  )

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• ??1
• Now, taking over land and taking away buildings
  are being carried out. The pre-qualification for
  land taking over and the evaluation of geological
  hazard, water and soil keeping, and earthquake
  have been approved. The feasibility study report
  of the project and the earliest design has been
  officially agreed by the Development and Reform
  Commission of Zhejinag Province.
• ??2
• At present, the requisition of land and the
  removal for constructions are underway. The
  prequalification for requisiting land and the
  evaluation of geological hazard,, water and soil
  conservation, and earthquake have been approved.
  The feasibility study report of the project and
  the initial design has been ratified by the
  Development and Reform Commission of Zhejinag
  Province.

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• (5). ??????????? ?????
• ??????????????????? ???????????????????,
  ???????????, ??????
• ?The number of books in the library has been
  going down.
• ?The stock of books in the library has been
  declining alarmingly.

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3)????????????????

• (1).?????????????
• ?????????
• ?????????35????????????????????????????,???
  ?????
• ????????????
• A). ??????
• ????????????????,?????????
• ?????examine?examination??????examine?the
  examining????examine?examining????examine?to
  examine????????????????

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• B).????????
• ?????????????(????????????)???????????,???????
  ???
• ? test instrument
• open insurance policy
• to send pictures by email
• the active implementing of scien-tech
  policies by the high-tech enterprises along the
  southeast coast of China ?.

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• C). ????????
• (a) ????
• ?l a.Her father died when we were fighting
  against the invaders.She has since carried on the
  work by herself.
• ?l b.Since the death of her father when we
  were fighting against the invaders, she has
  carried on the work by herself.

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• (b)????
• ?2.The moment the patient was sent into the
  hospital,the doctor arrived and examined her.The
  doctors arrival and examination of the patient
  brought about her very speedy recovery.
• ?2 ???????,????????
• arrived?examined,????arrival?examination??????????
  

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• (c). ? ?
• ?3 a.We must survey the underground rock
• structure geologically.
• ?3 b.A geological survey of the underground
  rock structure must be carried out.

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• (d).? ?
• ?4.In the summer of 1969,the Administration
  publicly urged an easing of tensions with China.
• ????? easing of tension???,????????????????ur
  ge to ease the tense relationship,
  ?????????????

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• ?. ????????????
• ????????? ??,?????,??????????????????make
  maintenance/maintain???,??????????,?complete
  degradation vegetable fiber- foamed tableware /
  fully-degradable vegetable fiber- foamed
  tableware?

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• ?.????????
• A).??????????????
• ???????
• ?1Project Background and Construction Conditions
• As a vital passage between the south of Zhejiang
  Province and north of Fujian Province, the
  Feiyunjiang River Bridge is burdened with
  increasingly heavy traffic flow in recent years
  as the economy develops rapidly in spite of the
  Ningbo-Taizhou-Wenzhou Expressway that shunts
  traffic to some extent. The project plays a
  significant role in effectively bypassing the
  traffic across the Feiyunjiang River Bridge,
  relieving the traffic congestion of the city and
  improving the traffic passing ability. According
  to the Zhejiang Provincial Government Document
  No. 1302000, the Feiyunjiang River Third
  Bridge is approved.

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• B). ??????????????????????????
• ?1?????????????????,?????????,?????????,????????
  ????????,???????????????

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• ??1
• The bridge across the Feiyunjiang River is the
  vital passage between the south of Zhejiang
  Province and north of Fujian Province. In recent
  years, the economy has developed rapidly.
  Although the expressway from Wenzhou to Ningbo
  through Taizhou shunts traffic to some extent,
  the flow of traffic on the bridge across the
  Feiyunjiang River is still increasingly heavy
  (58?).
• ??2
• As a vital passage between the south of Zhejiang
  Province and north of Fujian Province, the
  Feiyunjiang River Bridge is burdened with
  increasingly heavy traffic flow in recent years
  as the economy develops rapidly in spite of the
  Ningbo-Taizhou-Wenzhou Expressway that shunts
  traffic to some extent.(46?) .

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• ?2????????????,?????????????,?????
  ???????????????,???????????,2005??????368????
• ??1 Motorola is innovative and takes a lead in
  wireless and broadband communications, for which
  it is known around the world. As the company is
  one of the 100 enterprises selected by the
  Fortune magazine and has business and impact
  globally, Motorola had sales of 36.8 billion in
  2005.(49?)
• ??2 Motorola is known around the world for
  innovation and leadership in wireless and
  broadband communications A Fortune 100 company
  with global presence and impact, Motorola had
  sales of 36.8 billion in 2005.(33?)

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• (2). ??????????????
• ?. ????????
• ?1?? The tenderer should be informed that, if
  he has delivered, posted or dispatched his tender
  prior to the formal submission date he has the
  right to modify or make corrections to it,
  provided that any such modifications or
  corrections are received by the employer/engineer
  in writing prior to the time specified for
  submission of tenders.
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• ?2 In a device such as a refrigerant compressor
  provided with a reciprocating piston having a
  stroke length which can be changed from one value
  to another in accordance with the direction of
  rotation of the crankshaft driving a connecting
  rod, there is provided an arrangement in which
  the top dead center position of the piston can be
  maintained irrespective of the changes in stroke
  length by an eccentric ring which has limited
  rotation on the crankshaft crankpin and a second
  eccentric ring encompassing the first eccentric
  ring and which has limited rotation relative to
  the end of the connecting rod.
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  ?????????????????,??????????????,????????,?????

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• ?.????????????
• ??The AD 598 is a complete monolithic Linear
  Variable Differential Transformer(LVDT) signal
  conditioning subsystem. It is used in conjunction
  with LVDTs to convert transducer mechanical
  position to a unipolar or bipolar dc voltage with
  a high degree of accuracy and repeatability. All
  circuit functions are included on the chip. With
  the addition of a few external passive components
  to set frequency and gain, the AD 598 converts
  the raw LVDT secondary output to a scaled dc
  signal. The device can also be used with RVDT
  transducers.
• ??(AD 598 ??????????(LVDT)????????????????????LVD
  T,??????????????????????????,??????,??????????????
  ???????????????????????????????,??LVDT????????????
  ?????AD 598 ????????????RVDT(??????????)?

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• ?. ????????????
• ???????
• 1. ?????????
• ? ? ???, ?????
• ???? Contract Observation Enterprise
• ????????
• Strictly Obey Contract and Credible
  Enterprise
• Excellent Enterprises Who Adhering to the
  Contract and the Credit
• keeping the contract heavy credit unit
• promise the contract, keep the honor"
  enterprise
• guard contract and heaviest credit enterprise
• Stick-to Contract and Keep-Its- Word Unit
• contract-abiding and creditworthy company
• Following Contract and Observing Credit
  Enterprise
• keeping contract and credit enterprises
• "contract-stressing and promise-keeping
  enterprises
• unit of keeping the contract with good credit
• Contract Creditability Observing Enterprise

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• 2. ???????
• A). ?????
• ??(1)???????????
• ?? Translation from English into Chinese is not
  so easy as that from English into French.
• B). ??????
• ??????????????,??,???????,?????????????
• ??Cast irons normally are not considered to be
  malleable. Recent work has demonstrated, however,
  that the materials can be hot forged, hot rolled,
  and warm rolled.

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• C). ??????
• ?????????????
• ??Another method is the chemical process?
• ???????????,???????????????
• ??An electron tube is generally used for
  amplification, and vacuum tube is another name
  for this device?
• D). ???????(????)
• ??YG611S?????????????????????????????????????
  ??????????????????????
• ??The Xenon Arc Light Weather Fastness Tester
  works on the follwing principles The Model
  YG611S complies with the requirements for the
  test methods The tester is suitable for the
  colour fastness-to-light test in dyeing

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• E). ? ?
• ?? ??????????, ????100??,
  ?????????????
• ??1 Air quality has reached national standards,
  drinking water has reached the required standards
  by 100 and the control of environment noise has
  also reached national standards.
• ??2 Air quality, all of drinking water sources
  and ambient noise level are compliant with
  related national standards.
• ?????
• ?? B) ???????, ????????A)???B)???????
• A). We will not inform you if the
  technical data are changed.
• B). The technical data are subject to
  alteration without notice.
• A). The machine was adjusted before it
  leaves the factory.
• B). The machine is factory adjusted.