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Title: B. UCAS Personal Statements


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B. UCAS Personal Statements
An opportunity to tell Universities why they
should select you
Dr Jeremy Rawson, Undergraduate Admissions Tutor,
Magdalene College.
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UCAS Personal Statements
  • Are you portraying the right image?

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UCAS Personal Statements Overview
  • Key Points to Consider
  • What to Include
  • Dos and Donts
  • Size and Presentation
  • Plagiarism
  • One approach to writing your personal statement

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General Structure of a Personal Statement
Your motivation for the course Why are you
interested? How long? What initiated your
interest? Extracurricular activities further
reading/study - and work experience (if
appropriate) which have helped confirm your
decision.
  • Beginning
  • Middle
  • End

More about yourself your extracurricular
activities and interests. Try to tie in relevant
personal characteristics and skills to the course
itself.
Try and work on a concluding paragraph which
re-emphasises your motivation/anticipation/excitem
ent for study at a Higher level. Also include
future aspirations here if you have them and/or
how your proposed gap year will enhance your
suitability.
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Points to Consider 1
  • Make sure it is literate
  • This is often the only piece of written work from
    you which a Course Director has so he/she can
    examine your written style
  • Essential for Arts/Humanities subjects where
    course directors will be looking for an ability
    to form well-constructed prose.
  • Check structure - grammar spelling -
    punctuation

History Applicant (middle section)
In my free time I take part in a number of
activities including tennis and mountain walking.
These are particularly satisfactory hobbies, as
although they require hard work and practise,
there are few things greater than the sense of
achievement experienced when you win a match, or
make it to the top of the mountain. It is this
sense of achievement that has driven me to summit
all 14 peaks over 3,000 feet in Snowdonia.
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Points to Consider 2
  • b) Explain why you want to study the course(s)
    you are applying for
  • If you are applying for different courses at
    different universities
  • Bear in mind that your UCAS application is for
    all your courses
  • Try not to tailor it to one specific
    course/institution
  • Try to ensure that you aim for common themes of
    interest in your statement.
  • Usually easy(ish) for similar courses such as
    Natural Sciences vs Physics but you might wish to
    discuss this with a careers advisor for more
    diverse subject combinations.
  • Be prepared to justify why you have chosen
    alternative courses at different Universities

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Points to consider 2
Example Chemistryor Chemistry-with-French
Application?
An opening gambit
  • What I love about chemistry is the constant
    sense of discovery looking at the simplest
    reactions on a molecular level is like glimpsing
    a whole new world. I am keen to learn at the
    cutting edge of current knowledge and to
    contribute to new discoveries. During the course
    of my degree I hope to take part in some
    research after leaving university I am looking
    to work in science, possibly in research, and
    some experience will almost certainly come in
    useful. I would also like to continue my study of
    French at university I think it is a beautiful
    language and one of my ambitions is to become
    fluent.

A suggested revision
What I love about chemistry is the constant
sense of discovery looking at the simplest
reactions on a molecular level is like glimpsing
a whole new world. I am keen to learn at the
cutting edge of current knowledge and to
contribute to new discoveries. I relish the
opportunity to undertake some original research
during my degree and such experiences will be
invaluable after leaving university when I hope
to work in science. Academic and industrial
research now revolve about a global market in
which communication skills are essential. Whilst
at school I have thoroughly enjoyed the
opportunity to study French to A2 level alongside
my sciences and I am enthusiastic to continue
this formally or informally at University.
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Points to consider 3
  • c) Try to link your academic and personal
    abilities and experiences to your course
  • It may help to draw up a list of your hobbies and
    experiences and see how you can use them to
    support your course structure (without being too
    tenuous!)
  • Try to embellish your discussion with some
    relevant detail as to why something motivates you.

Law Applicant (beginning)
From a young age, I have been fascinated by law
and was thrilled at the possibility of studying
it at A-Level. In August 2007, I was able to
spend two weeks working at
Solicitors in . Most of my
time was spent in the Conveyancing department,
where , a partner in the
firm, taught me how to draw up commercial leases
and business contracts, and about buying, selling
and renting residential properties.
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Points to Consider 4
  • d) Trying to make your statement stand out
  • It is tempting to use humour, quotes or jokes to
    make your personal statement stand out. Be
    warned-
  • These often appear formulaic and do not always
    have the desired effect.
  • The Course Director might not appreciate your
    sense of humour dont forget they may have
    several hundred to read!
  • Sincere interest and enthusiasm usually work best.

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Points to Consider 5
  • e) Your personal statement is often the only
    thing that an interviewer knows about you know
    and be prepared to answer questions on what you
    have written!

Another Chemistry Applicantand another
beginning!
I first became interested in Chemistry at GCSE
level as this was the first time that I had
studied the sciences separately. I found it a
subject that I understood and have continued to
find thoroughly enjoyable and achieve very well
in. I am currently spending my year out working
as an Analytical Chemist for xxxxx and I am
finding my interests towards a career using
Chemistry continually confirmed.
What have you been doing as an analytical
chemist? What techniques have you used? How
do they work? What sorts of molecules is this
technique appropriate for?
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What to include 1
  • Interests, experiences and abilities related to
    your chosen course
  • Draw up a list of things which motivate you to
    study the course
  • School subjects
  • Work experience, especially when relevant to
    your chosen course
  • Extra reading in the wider area beyond the
    course syllabus
  • Web-sites
  • School/family trips or excursions

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What to include 2
  • b) Extra-curricular activities
  • Detail aspects of your significant
    extra-curricular activities especially with
    regard to
  • Organisational ability
  • Time-management
  • Skills related to the course

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What to include 3
  • c) Additional Qualifications
  • Detail aspects of your significant
    extra-curricular activities especially with
    regard to
  • Other skills/achievements e.g. Duke of
    Edinburgh, Black belt in Judo
  • Studies beyond school classes
    National/International Olympiads, Cipher
    challenge
  • Positions of Responsibility
  • Attributes which make you different

History Applicants (middle sections) Outside
school, my interests in art and literature are a
helpful balance to my academic work. I have also
been a member of Circus Eruption, a group working
with able-bodied and disabled young people
through the medium of circus skills, for six
years.
After my GCSEs I stepped back from full-time
education for a year. I needed time to think
about where I was coming from and where I wanted
to go in the future. The sense of venturing into
territory alien to my Traveller culture induced
considerable anxiety. I learned to drive and
worked part-time. I look back on this period not
with regret, but with appreciation for the
maturity I gained.
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What to include 4
  • d) Future Aspirations
  • This may be very tentative at this stage.
  • Some courses are vocational (Medicine,
    Veterinary Science, Law, Engineering) and
    potential career paths are easily identified.
  • Some courses are more academic (History, English,
    Maths). Explain how you feel the qualification is
    going to help you along your chosen career path.
  • Perhaps youre undecided. If so, focus on your
    enthusiasm for the subject youve chosen.

Although some would argue the study for an
English degree is not vocational I see the next
few years of my life as the opportunity to become
immersed in a subject I love. To develop my
potential as a writer, I need to analyse and
understand the work of those who inhabit library
shelves. This course offers me the chance to
explore the depths of Shakespeare, unravel the
mysteries of Byron and grow in confidence as a
literacy critic and person.
There are many things that I still want to do
and learn, and I see university as the best
opportunity to get involved more in drama and
music, try some debating and hopefully take up a
sport. Although having done relatively little so
far, I regard university as a place where I can
realise my potential in every aspect of life and
also have a lot of fun studying what I love.
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Dos and Donts
  • Do
  • a) Check University courses for their academic
    requirements
  • - Are you realistically going to meet their
    entrance requirements?
  • Are you studying the right subjects for their
    course?
  • Do they have additional recommended
    criteria/qualities?
  • - If so, do you have at least some of them?!
  • b) Create a list of ideas which you might like to
    incorporate before you start
  • - Academic background
  • Wider reading beyond the syllabus
  • (Relevant) Work Experience
  • Extra-curricular activities especially showing
    responsibility, commitment, organisation.

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Dos and Donts
  • Do
  • c) Assume your first draft will not be perfect!
  • Ask people you know and trust for critical and
    ideally constructive feedback parents are not
    always best as they might not like to hurt your
    feelings!
  • Carefully check spelling, grammar and
    punctuation.
  • d) Justify your course choice! Implement
  • - Your subject interests
  • Your wider academic experiences
  • Work experience (positive and negative)
  • Try and incorporate lots of enthusiasm for the
    course!

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Dos and Donts
  • Do
  • e) Underline and justify your personal qualities
    to undertake the course
  • - Usually organisation, time-management,
    responsibility
  • f) Outline future provisional post-degree
    plans
  • Some courses are vocational (Medicine,
    Veterinary Science, Law, Engineering)
  • Potential career paths are easily identified.
  • Some courses are more academic (History, English,
    Maths).
  • Explain how you feel the qualification is going
    to help you along your chosen career path.
  • Perhaps youre undecided.
  • If so, focus on your enthusiasm for the subject
    youve chosen

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Dos and Donts
  • Dont
  • a) Use over elaborate language to embellish your
    prose.
  • b) Wander too much from the point of your
    argument
  • - Review what you have written from time to time
  • c) Lie
  • Needless to say there are serious repercussions
    if you falsify examination results.
  • Its all too easy to get caught out at an
    interview if you have lied or exaggerated about
    your experiences/achievements.
  • d) Rely on a spell-checker!
  • - In principal a spell-checker should pick up
    awl mistakes
  • - Re-read your statement after several days and
    get someone else to read it too!

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Dos and Donts
  • Dont
  • e) Wait until the last minute
  • Your statement will likely appear rushed
  • Youll probably omit important arguments or
    factors supporting your application
  • f) Try and write your statement whilst surfing or
    watching TV
  • Give it your full attention
  • g) Copy or use someone elses statement
  • - UCAS has a sophisticated plagiarism checkersee
    later

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Size and Presentation
  • 4,000 characters or 47 lines of text (whichever
    comes first)
  • - You cannot use bold, italics, underline,
    various fonts etc
  • - You do not have to use every last character of
    space
  • - But you should use a lot of the space on offer!
  • - You can use blank lines between paragraphs

Ensure your text appears well-presented and you
are making a coherent series of
statements. - Prepare your statement off-line in
Word, Notepad, Wordpad etc. - After it has been
read, re-read, proof-checked etc - Upload/copy-pa
ste onto the UCAS website once you are happy with
the content. - When you save your document, UCAS
will tell you if there are space characters left
or if youve used too many!
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Beyond UCAS
  • Additional Information
  • Some Universities may request further
    information from you in order to assess your
    ability for their course.
  • If there is additional information which you
    feel relevant to your application but you did not
    wish to include in your UCAS statement, contact
    the University directly. They will often be happy
    to accept additional information, but ensure it
    can be clearly identified as your work (your name
    and UCAS ID number are helpful).
  • In some cases you might be invited for an
    academic interview

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Plagiarism
  • Similarity Detection
  • All UCAS personal statements are subject to a
    similarity detection test.
  • Copycatch software quantifies the similarity
    between statements and reports findings
  • Copycatch compares your personal statement with
  • - All previous and current statements on UCAS
  • - Other personal statements which have been found
    on websites
  • - Other sources including paper publications.

Do read other personal statements to see what is
required. Do not use other peoples personal
statements and a Thesaurus as a template. Do not
let other people use your personal statement as a
template.
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One approach to writing your UCAS personal
statement
  • Decide on the type of course you are interested
    in which fits your interests and academic
    background
  • Choose appropriate Universities which offer that
    course and where you are most likely to meet
    their academic requirements .
  • Generate a list of activities in and out of
    school which interest you
  • Spend time evaluating how you can implement your
    experiences, activities and interests to support
    your course decision link them to
    beginning/middle/end sections
  • Find other personal statements for the
    same/similar courses assess them critically
    identify good and bad parts try and identify
    why they are good/bad so you can implement those
    techniques
  • Prepare a first draft bearing in mind the
    following
  • - Use your experiences in and out of school to
    justify your course choice(s)
  • - Showing interest in your subject beyond the
    classroom is really important
  • - Where possible tie in skills from
    extracurricular interests into skills required
    for higher education
  • - If youre taking a gap year justify how it
    will strengthen your application.
  • - Balance your personal statement between
    motivation and enthusiasm for your course and
    your extracurricular activities
  • Ask someone you trust to read your statement and
    offer constructive advice/criticism.
  • Revise your statement in light of their comments
    and re-circulate to others until you are content.

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Sources
  • UCAS webpages
  • Many personal statements are available on-line
    (all statements used here were in the public
    domain)
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