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• Making It Better

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• I like soccer.

• Soccer is a fantastic sport.

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• I dont think people will get tired of soccer.

• Soccer is not just a passing fad. Soccer is here
  to stay.

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• You have to be coordinated and in good shape to
  play soccer.

• Soccer is a game that involves fancy footwork,
  steady nerves and stamina.

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• I like to play and watch soccer.

• Soccer is fun to play and fun to watch.