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The Writers World Paragraphs and Essays
  • Part IV Editing Handbook
  • Chapter 25 Subject-Verb
  • Agreement

2
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 1
Example Write the correct present tense form of
the verb in parentheses.
  • Example Mila Zahns family (live) ___near
    Hamburg, Germany.
  • Mila Zahns family (live) lives near
    Hamburg, Germany.

3
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 1
Write the correct present tense form of the verb
in parentheses.
  • 1. Mila Zahn is a German exchange student, and
    she (study) ___ in an American college.
  • 1. Mila Zahn is a German exchange student, and
    she (study) studies in an American college.
  • 2. Zahn (see) ___ many glaring cultural
    differences between Americans and Germans.
  • 2. Zahn (see) sees many glaring cultural
    differences between Americans and Germans.

4
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 1
Write the correct present tense form of the verb
in parentheses.
  • 3. Many American students (juggle) ___ work and
    school.
  • 3. Many American students (juggle) juggle work
    and school.
  • 4. For example, Milas friend Amber (do) ___ not
    have much money.
  • 4. For example, Milas friend Amber (do) does
    not have much money.

5
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 1
Write the correct present tense form of the verb
in parentheses.
  • 5. Amber (work) ___ part time so that she can
    pay for her studies.
  • 5. Amber (work) works part time so that she can
    pay for her studies.
  • 6. However, in Germany, the state (sponsor) ___
    all levels of education, so students (do) ___ not
    feel financial pressure.
  • 6. However, in Germany, the state (sponsor)
    sponsors all levels of education, so students
    (do) do not feel financial pressure.

6
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 1
Write the correct present tense form of the verb
in parentheses.
  • 7. (Do) ___ the average American student pay too
    much for higher levels of education?
  • 7. (Do) Does the average American student pay
    too much for higher levels of education?
  • 8. (Do) ___ you work and go to college?
  • 8. (Do) Do you work and go to college?

7
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Example Correct errors in subject-verb agreement
or use of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • Example Many exchange students studies in the
    United States.
  • Many exchange students study in the United
    States.

8
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement or use
of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • 1. Emi Kawamura is a Japanese exchange student.
    According to Emi, many American students has many
    misguided ideas about the Japanese. Emi remind
    people that she do not fit any stereotype. For
    example, her math skills is poor and she rarely
    uses computers.

9
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement or use
of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • 1. Emi Kawamura is a Japanese exchange student.
    According to Emi, many American students have
    many misguided ideas about the Japanese. Emi
    reminds people that she does not fit any
    stereotype. For example, her math skills are poor
    and she rarely uses computers.

10
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement or use
of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • 2. The educational system in Japan differ from
    that in the United States. Japanese students has
    a longer school year than American students.
    Japanese college entrance exams is very
    difficult, and students experience high levels of
    stress. Emis brother, Jin, attends a private
    cramming school called a juku. He have to study
    six days a week because he hopes to get into a
    good university.

11
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement or use
of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • 2. The educational system in Japan differs from
    that in the United States. Japanese students have
    a longer school year than American students.
    Japanese college entrance exams are very
    difficult, and students experience high levels of
    stress. Emis brother, Jin, attends a private
    cramming school called a juku. He has to study
    six days a week because he hopes to get into a
    good university.

12
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement or use
of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • 3. Because of complaints from parents and
    students, Japanese officials wants to reform the
    educational system. One plan is to place less
    emphasis on entrance exams. The current system
    aint healthy for students.
  • 3. Because of complaints from parents and
    students, Japanese officials want to reform the
    educational system. One plan is to place less
    emphasis on entrance exams. The current system is
    not healthy for students.

13
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 2
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement or use
of aint. Verbs are underlined.
  • 4. Although the average Japanese student have a
    stressful experience in high school, the
    situation changes in college. American college
    courses is more difficult than those in Japan, in
    Emis opinion.
  • 4. Although the average Japanese student has a
    stressful experience in high school, the
    situation changes in college. American college
    courses are more difficult than those in Japan,
    in Emis opinion.

14
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Example Correct subject-verb agreement errors.
Each verb is underlined.
  • Example A problem exist in many colleges and
    universities.
  • A problem exists in many colleges and
    universities.

15
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Correct subject-verb agreement errors. Each verb
is underlined.
  • 1. Hazing occur on many American campuses. When
    a new student want to gain admittance to a club
    or organization, the student undergoes an
    initiation ritual.
  • 1. Hazing occurs on many American campuses. When
    a new student wants to gain admittance to a club
    or organization, the student undergoes an
    initiation ritual.

16
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Correct subject-verb agreement errors. Each verb
is underlined.
  • 2. For example, in 2004, at the University of
    Central Florida, some fraternity members was
    wrapped in plastic and tied to a tree. One
    student was also covered in shaving cream,
    chocolate syrup, and vegetable oil. Many students
    was upset when they heard about the incident.
    Since that time, other fraternity members has
    denied their involvement in hazing.

17
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Correct subject-verb agreement errors. Each verb
is underlined.
  • 2. For example, in 2004, at the University of
    Central Florida, some fraternity members were
    wrapped in plastic and tied to a tree. One
    student was also covered in shaving cream,
    chocolate syrup, and vegetable oil. Many students
    were upset when they heard about the incident.
    Since that time, other fraternity members have
    denied their involvement in hazing.

18
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Correct subject-verb agreement errors. Each verb
is underlined.
  • 3. Sometimes hazing rituals is dangerous. Hank
    Newar is a professor and journalist, and he have
    written a book called Broken Pledges The Deadly
    Rite of Hazing. Newar states, Collegiate hazing
    has resulted in at least 59 fraternity deaths
    since the 1970s.

19
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Correct subject-verb agreement errors. Each verb
is underlined.
  • 3. Sometimes hazing rituals are dangerous. Hank
    Newar is a professor and journalist, and he has
    written a book called Broken Pledges The Deadly
    Rite of Hazing. Newar states, Collegiate hazing
    has resulted in at least 59 fraternity deaths
    since the 1970s.

20
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 3
Correct subject-verb agreement errors. Each verb
is underlined.
  • 4. Although hazing has been banned in most
    states, many clubs continues to perform illegal
    rituals. When hazing rituals is reported, the
    offending club can loses its affiliation with the
    university.
  • 4. Although hazing has been banned in most
    states, many clubs continue to perform illegal
    rituals. When hazing rituals are reported, the
    offending club can lose its affiliation with the
    university.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 4
Example Underline the correct verb. Make sure
the verb agrees with the subject.
  • Example Colleges and universities (have,
    has) various interesting programs.
  • Colleges and universities (have, has)
    various interesting programs.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 4
Underline the correct verb. Make sure the verb
agrees with the subject.
  • 1. Both Theo and Amber (study, studies) nursing.
  • 1. Both Theo and Amber (study, studies) nursing.
  • 2. Amber and her mother (live, lives) in Los
    Angeles.
  • 2. Amber and her mother (live, lives) in Los
    Angeles.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 4
Underline the correct verb. Make sure the verb
agrees with the subject.
  • 3. Two buses or a train (transport, transports)
    Amber to her college campus.
  • 3. Two buses or a train (transport, transports)
    Amber to her college campus.
  • 4. Theo and his mother (reside, resides) in a
    small town outside San Francisco.
  • 4. Theo and his mother (reside, resides) in a
    small town outside San Francisco.

24
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 4
Underline the correct verb. Make sure the verb
agrees with the subject.
  • 5. Neither of the two local colleges nor the
    university (offer, offers) nursing programs.
  • 5. Neither of the two local colleges nor the
    university (offer, offers) nursing programs.
  • 6. Each day, Theo and his girlfriend (travel,
    travels) to Samuel Merrit College in Oakland.
  • 6. Each day, Theo and his girlfriend (travel,
    travels) to Samuel Merrit College in Oakland.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 4
Underline the correct verb. Make sure the verb
agrees with the subject.
  • 7. Neither Theo nor his parents (has, have) a
    lot of money.
  • 7. Neither Theo nor his parents (has, have) a
    lot of money.
  • 8. Each year, either two fast-food restaurants
    or the local hardware store (sponsor, sponsors)
    low-income students.
  • 8. Each year, either two fast-food restaurants
    or the local hardware store (sponsor, sponsors)
    low-income students.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 4
Underline the correct verb. Make sure the verb
agrees with the subject.
  • 9. Work and careful planning (pay, pays) off for
    college students.
  • 9. Work and careful planning (pay, pays) off for
    college students.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Example Underline the subject and underline the
verb in the parentheses.
  • Example Many campuses (have, has) secret
    societies.
  • Many campuses (have, has) secret societies.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 1. Skull and Bones (is, are) a very old
    organization at Yale University. Some (suggest,
    suggests) that it is the most influential secret
    society in the nation. Members (has, have)
    included heads of the Central Intelligence
    Agency, bankers, and U.S. presidents.
  • 1. Skull and Bones (is, are) a very old
    organization at Yale University. Some (suggest,
    suggests) that it is the most influential secret
    society in the nation. Members (has, have)
    included heads of the Central Intelligence
    Agency, bankers, and U.S. presidents.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 2. The society (was, were) established in 1832.
    Each year, senior Bonesmen or Boneswomen
    (select, selects) fifteen new members. Nobody
    (is, are) invited into the club unless he or she
    (is, are) a member of a well-known family.
  • 2. The society (was, were) established in 1832.
    Each year, senior Bonesmen or Boneswomen
    (select, selects) fifteen new members. Nobody
    (is, are) invited into the club unless he or she
    (is, are) a member of a well-known family.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 3. At Yale, everyone (know, knows) about Skull
    and Bones. Third-year students (wonder, wonders)
    who will become Bones members. On a specific day
    each year, someone (tap, taps) each new member on
    the shoulder. Nobody (expect, expects) to be
    selected. Certainly, some (is, are) surprised
    when they (is, are) asked to appear at a secret
    meeting place.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 3. At Yale, everyone (know, knows) about Skull
    and Bones. Third-year students (wonder, wonders)
    who will become Bones members. On a specific day
    each year, someone (tap, taps) each new member on
    the shoulder. Nobody (expect, expects) to be
    selected. Certainly, some (is, are) surprised
    when they (is, are) asked to appear at a secret
    meeting place.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 4. New members (undergo, undergoes) special
    rituals on initiation night. Outside the society,
    nobody (know, knows) exactly what happens to new
    members because they (is, are) sworn to secrecy.
    Members (is, are) even reluctant to admit that
    they (is, are) members of the secret society.
    During the 19901994 presidency of George H. W.
    Bush, someone (was, were) curious about the
    presidents ties to Skull and Bones. Bush left
    the room abruptly when he (was, were) asked about
    his links to the secret society. Perhaps the
    public will never know what really goes on in
    Skull and Bones.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 5
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 4. New members (undergo, undergoes) special
    rituals on initiation night. Outside the society,
    nobody (know, knows) exactly what happens to new
    members because they (is, are) sworn to secrecy.
    Members (is, are) even reluctant to admit that
    they (is, are) members of the secret society.
    During the 19901994 presidency of George H. W.
    Bush, someone (was, were) curious about the
    presidents ties to Skull and Bones. Bush left
    the room abruptly when he (was, were) asked about
    his links to the secret society. Perhaps the
    public will never know what really goes on in
    Skull and Bones.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 6
Example Underline the subject and underline the
verb in the parentheses.
  • Example The National Guard (is, are) a very
    structured organization.
  • The National Guard (is, are) a very
    structured organization.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 6
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 1. Nantha Kumars family (is, are) middle class.
    They (live, lives) in a beautiful community near
    Austin, Texas. The population (is, are) around
    50,000 residents.
  • 1. Nantha Kumars family (is, are) middle class.
    They (live, lives) in a beautiful community near
    Austin, Texas. The population (is, are) around
    50,000 residents.

36
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 6
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 2. Although his siblings (have, has) succeeded
    in various careers, Nantha (have, has) had many
    problems over the years. The police (have, has)
    visited his home many times because he (have,
    has) driven too fast or created a disturbance.
    Some of Nanthas crimes (has, have) been serious.
    A local gang (has, have) robbed several stores.
    Last year, a jury (was, were) asked to decide
    whether Nantha (was, were) part of that gang.
    Nanthas friends (was, were) convicted, but he
    (was, were) released.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 6
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 2. Although his siblings (have, has) succeeded
    in various careers, Nantha (have, has) had many
    problems over the years. The police (have, has)
    visited his home many times because he (have,
    has) driven too fast or created a disturbance.
    Some of Nanthas crimes (has, have) been serious.
    A local gang (has, have) robbed several stores.
    Last year, a jury (was, were) asked to decide
    whether Nantha (was, were) part of that gang.
    Nanthas friends (was, were) convicted, but he
    (was, were) released.

38
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 6
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 3. Nanthas father (want, wants) him to join
    the National Guard. The National Guard (finance,
    finances) student educations. The military
    (force, forces) irresponsible young people to
    grow up quickly. However, Nanthas extended
    family (do, does) not think he should join.
  • 3. Nanthas father (want, wants) him to join
    the National Guard. The National Guard (finance,
    finances) student educations. The military
    (force, forces) irresponsible young people to
    grow up quickly. However, Nanthas extended
    family (do, does) not think he should join.

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Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 6
Underline the subjects and underline the verbs in
the parentheses.
  • 4. Nanthas grandparents (plan, plans) to pay
    for his college education. His family (hope,
    hopes) that he will become a more responsible
    citizen.
  • 4. Nanthas grandparents (plan, plans) to pay
    for his college education. His family (hope,
    hopes) that he will become a more responsible
    citizen.

40
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 7
Example Correct subject-verb agreement errors. If
the sentence is correct, write C.
  • Example Has you ever won a competition?
  • Have you ever won a competition?

41
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 7
Correct any subject-verb agreement errors. If the
sentence is correct, write C.
  • 1. There is many athletic scholarships in the
    college.
  • 1. There are many athletic scholarships in the
    college.
  • 2. Has many students benefited from the
    scholarships?
  • 2. Have many students benefited from the
    scholarships?
  • 3. Does athletes get preferential treatment?
  • 3. Do athletes get preferential treatment?

42
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 7
Correct any subject-verb agreement errors. If the
sentence is correct, write C.
  • 4. Is there a reason to stop giving scholarships
    to athletes?
  • 4. C
  • 5. There is many pressures on student athletes.
  • 5. There are many pressures on student athletes.
  • 6. Why do Wayne Brydon want to play basketball
    professionally?
  • 6. Why does Wayne Brydon want to play basketball
    professionally?

43
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 7
Correct any subject-verb agreement errors. If the
sentence is correct, write C.
  • 7. Do female athletes have the same
    opportunities?
  • 7. C
  • 8. According to Selma Rowen, there have not been
    enough attention given to academically successful
    students.
  • 8. According to Selma Rowen, there has not been
    enough attention given to academically successful
    students.

44
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 7
Correct any subject-verb agreement errors. If the
sentence is correct, write C.
  • 9. On the other hand, there is many people who
    support athletes.
  • 9. On the other hand, there are many people who
    support athletes.
  • 10. In addition to doing their course work, do
    college athletes have to train for several hours
    each day?
  • 10. C

45
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Example Underline the subject, add parentheses
around any words between subject and verb, and
circle correct form of verb.
  • Example One of the most controversial issues on
    campus is, are affirmative action.
  • One (of the most controversial issues on
    campus) is, are affirmative action.

46
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 1. Some colleges in this country have, has more
    relaxed admission standards for students from
    ethnic minorities. Such colleges, with good
    reason, want, wants to have a vibrant and diverse
    student population. However, arguing that they
    have been discriminated against, students from
    across the nation have, has sued their colleges.
    Judges in courtrooms have, has had to consider
    whether affirmative action is unfair.

47
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 1. Some colleges (in this country) have, has
  • more relaxed admission standards for
  • students from ethnic minorities. Such colleges,
  • (with good reason), want, wants to have a
  • vibrant and diverse student population.
  • However, arguing that they have been
  • discriminated against, students (from across
  • the nation) have, has sued their colleges.
  • Judges (in courtrooms) have, has had to
  • consider whether affirmative action is unfair.

48
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 2. People in favor of affirmative action have,
    has compelling arguments. Historically, some
    ethnic groups in the United States has, have not
    had access to a higher education. Many factors
    such as poverty contribute, contributes to the
    problem. University of California professor
    Norman Matloff, in an article for Asian Week,
    suggest, suggests that society suffers when there
    is a large, poorly educated underclass.
    Additionally, affirmative action help, helps
    create a diverse student body.

49
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 2. People (in favor of affirmative action) have,
  • has compelling arguments. Historically, some
    ethnic
  • groups (in the United States) has, have not had
  • access to a higher education. Many factors (such
    as
  • poverty) contribute, contributes to the problem.
  • University of California professor Norman
    Matloff, (in
  • an article for Asian Week,) suggest, suggests
    that
  • society suffers when there is a large, poorly
    educated
  • underclass. Additionally, affirmative action
    help, helps
  • create a diverse student body.

50
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 3. Opponents of affirmative action feel, feels
    that admissions should be based purely on test
    scores. Barbara Grutter, a white student and an
    applicant to the University of Michigan, argue,
    argues that affirmative action is reverse
    discrimination. One of her best arguments is, are
    compelling Grutter, as a forty-year-old single
    mother, add, adds to the universitys diversity.
    On June 23, 2003, a decision about Grutters
    affirmative action case was, were made. Although
    justices in the Supreme Court were, was divided,
    they ruled that race can be used as one of the
    factors in college admissions.

51
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 3. Opponents (of affirmative action) feel, feels
    that
  • admissions should be based purely on test
    scores.
  • Barbara Grutter, (a white student and an
    applicant to
  • the University of Michigan), argue, argues that
  • affirmative action is reverse discrimination.
    One (of her
  • best arguments) is, are compelling Grutter,
    (as a
  • forty-year-old single mother, add, adds to the
  • universitys diversity. On June 23, 2003, a
    decision
  • (about Grutters affirmative action case) was,
    were
  • made. Although justices in the Supreme Court
    were,
  • was divided, they ruled that race can be used as
    one
  • of the factors in college admissions.

52
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 8
Underline the subject, add parentheses around any
words between subject and verb, and circle
correct form of verb.
  • 4. For some people, regulations to safeguard
    affirmative action help, helps equalize
    opportunities in our society. For others, such
    regulations is, are unfair to certain groups.
    What is your opinion?
  • 4. For some people, regulations (to safeguard
  • affirmative action) help, helps equalize
  • opportunities in our society. For others, such
  • regulations is, are unfair to certain groups.
    What is
  • your opinion?

53
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 9
Example Correct subject-verb agreement errors.
  • Example The English department has a help
    center that open on weekdays.
  • The English department has a help center
    that opens on weekdays.

54
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 9
Correct subject-verb agreement errors.
  • 1. Students who needs help with their English can
    go to the help center. My friend who never speak
    English at home often goes to the help center. He
    does exercises that helps him. He says that the
    woman who work there is friendly.
  • 1. Students who need help with their English can
    go to the help center. My friend who never speaks
    English at home often goes to the help center. He
    does exercises that helps him. He says that the
    woman who works there is friendly.

55
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 9
Correct subject-verb agreement errors.
  • 2. There is some computers in the help center. If
    a student who have an assignment due need to use
    a computer, one is available. There is also
    several tutors available who help the students.
  • 2. There are some computers in the help center.
    If a student who has an assignment due needs to
    use a computer, one is available. There are also
    several tutors available who help the students.

56
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementPractice 9
Correct subject-verb agreement errors.
  • 3. Sometimes the administrators who control the
    budget threatens to close the help center. When
    that happens, students who uses the center
    protest. Then the center remains open.
  • 3. Sometimes the administrators who control the
    budget threaten to close the help center. When
    that happens, students who use the center
    protest. Then the center remains open.

57
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementFinal Review
Example Correct errors in subject-verb agreement.
  • Example This college campus look peaceful.
  • This college campus looks peaceful.

58
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementFinal Review
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement.
  • 1. Two years ago, Elmira Reed left home for the
    first time and went to her state college. Today,
    Reed, a biology major, has a private dorm room on
    campus. She admits that she love the feeling of
    independence. However, last March, Reeds purse
    and book bag was stolen from her car, and in May,
    there was robberies in several dorm rooms.

59
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementFinal Review
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement.
  • 1. Two years ago, Elmira Reed left home for the
    first time and went to her state college. Today,
    Reed, a biology major, has a private dorm room on
    campus. She admits that she loves the feeling of
    independence. However, last March, Reeds purse
    and book bag were stolen from her car, and in
    May, there were robberies in several dorm rooms.

60
Chapter 25 Subject-Verb AgreementFinal Review
Correct errors in subject-verb agreement.
  • 2. College campuses is not always the peaceful
    and safe places that they appears to be. In fact,
    according to the New York Times Magazine, there
    is over eight assaults or other violent crimes
    per year on the average college or university
    campus. However, if each student take a few
    simple precautions, he or she can reduce the risk
    of being a crime victim.

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  • 2. College campuses are not always the peaceful
    and safe places that they appear to be. In fact,
    according to the New York Times Magazine, there
    are over eight assaults or other violent crimes
    per year on the average college or university
    campus. However, if each student takes a few
    simple precautions, he or she can reduce the risk
    of being a crime victim.

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  • 3. First, everyone who live in campus dorms need
    to act responsibly. Neither Reed nor her roommate
    take proper precautions. Sometimes, when Reeds
    roommate go out for the evening, she posts
    information about her whereabouts on her room
    door. However, such information provide thieves
    with an invitation to break in. Students should
    not leave notes posted on their doors, and they
    should always lock their room doors even if they
    plan to be absent for only a short while.

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  • 3. First, everyone who lives in campus dorms
    needs to act responsibly. Neither Reed nor her
    roommate takes proper precautions. Sometimes,
    when Reeds roommate goes out for the evening,
    she posts information about her whereabouts on
    her room door. However, such information provides
    thieves with an invitation to break in. Students
    should not leave notes posted on their doors, and
    they should always lock their room doors even if
    they plan to be absent for only a short while.

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  • 4. Furthermore, students should familiarize
    themselves with campus security locations. There
    is usually call boxes in certain buildings, and
    students should know where to find those
    emergency phones. Also, if someone want to study
    in a secluded location at night, he or she should
    inform campus security. Some campuses has walk
    home services for students who uses the library
    late at night. New students need to find out what
    the campus has to offer.

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  • 4. Furthermore, students should familiarize
    themselves with campus security locations. There
    are usually call boxes in certain buildings, and
    students should know where to find those
    emergency phones. Also, if someone wants to study
    in a secluded location at night, he or she should
    inform campus security. Some campuses have walk
    home services for students who use the library
    late at night. New students need to find out what
    the campus has to offer.

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  • 5. Ultimately, anyone who live on campus need to
    think about security. If nobody take precautions,
    then more robberies will occur. Remember that
    colleges are public places buildings are open
    late, and there is not always a lot of security
    guards on campus. Therefore, it is important to
    be sensible.

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  • 5. Ultimately, anyone who lives on campus needs
    to think about security. If nobody takes
    precautions, then more robberies will occur.
    Remember that colleges are public places
    buildings are open late, and there are not always
    a lot of security guards on campus. Therefore, it
    is important to be sensible.
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