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Title: 7th GRADE DOL


1
7th GRADE DOLS
  • Mrs. Nortons Class

2
DOL 1
  1. we have drank all of the fruit punch eric but
    mother will buy some more for we kids
  2. they arrived late they missed the beginning of
    the movie raiders of the lost arc

3
DOL 1-Corrections
  1. We have drunk all of the fruit punch, Eric, but
    Mother will buy some more for us kids.
  2. Because they arrived late, they missed the
    beginning of the movie Raiders of the Lost Arc.

4
DOL 2
  1. inside of the room you could see how good he sat
    the Dining room table
  2. vicky is the better of the four athletes but she
    cant be at all the games

5
DOL 2-Corrections
  1. Inside the room you could see how well he had set
    the dining room table.
  2. Vicky is the best of the four athletes, but she
    cant be at all the games.

6
DOL 3
  1. if you had shook the malt good you could of
    drank it easily
  2. please do the following things mail that package
    type the lists straightening the books and
    phoning mrs ames

7
DOL 3- Corrections
  1. If you had shaken the malt well, you could have
    drunk it easily.
  2. Please do the following things mail the package,
    type the lists, straighten the books, and phone
    Mrs. Ames.

8
DOL 4
  1. ive never had no desire to have him learn me how
    to drive because hes to critical
  2. i would of froze that corn but I couldnt get it
    off of the cob

9
DOL 4- Corrections
  1. Ive never had any desire to have him teach me
    how to drive because hes too critical.
  2. I would have frozen that corn, but I couldnt get
    it off the cob.

10
DOL 5
  1. will you read the novel time warp or will you
    read the magazine article scientific mysteries
    over the weekend
  2. i will lay down for a while and then go watch the
    movie gandhi

11
DOL 5- Corrections
  1. Will you read the novel Time Warp, or will you
    read the magazine article Scientific Mysteries
    over the weekend?
  2. I will lie down for a while and then go to watch
    the movie Gandhi.

12
DOL 6
  1. marty and me have ate our lunches therefore well
    carry the boxes to the room
  2. unless you lay down for a while youll collapse
    from overwork

13
DOL 6-Corrections
  1. Marty and I have eaten our lunches therefore,
    well carry the boxes to the room.
  2. Unless you lie down for a while, youll collapse
    from overwork.

14
DOL 7
  1. i and my brother seen the movie young
    frankenstein at the majestic theater
  2. there are two girls who are reading the short
    story called the india swing theyll shar it is
    Class

15
DOL 7-corrections
  1. My brother and I saw the movie Young Frankenstein
    at the Majestic Theater.
  2. Two girls are reading the short story called The
    Indian Swing theyll share it in class.

16
DOL 8
  1. betty exclaimed dont touch that hot pan
  2. I should of wore them gloves but i returned them
    back to my sister

17
DOL 8-Corrections
  1. Betty exclaimed, Dont touch that hot pan!
  2. I should have worn those gloves, but I returned
    them to my sister.

18
DOL 9
  1. to be specific the chicago tribune is different
    from the chicago sun-times because the former
    contains more sections
  2. he learned we students to refinish furniture as a
    result i refinished this table

19
DOL 9-corrections
  1. To be specific, the Chicago Tribune is different
    from the Chicago Sun-Times because the former
    contains more sections.
  2. He taught us students to refinish furniture as a
    result, I refinished this table.

20
DOL 11
  • to enjoy a shakespearean play like hamlet a
    person should read it before seeing it i believe
  • since donnas poem entitled springtime won first
    prize mr harris our teacher read it to us

21
DOL 11-Corrections
  1. To enjoy a Shakespearean play like Hamlet, a
    person should read it before seeing it, I
    believe.
  2. Since Donnas poem entitled Springtime won
    first prize, Mr. Harris, our teacher, read it to
    us.

22
DOL 12
  1. the japanese company has began to develop to new
    computers and they plan to market there products
    next year
  2. please leave roy read carls popular mechanics
    magazine since carl has already wrote his reoport

23
DOL 12-Corrections
  1. The Japanese company has begun to develop new
    computers, and they plan to market their products
    next year.
  2. Please let Roy read Carls Popular Mechanics
    magazine since Carl has already written his
    report.

24
DOL 13
  1. cindy she dont borrow her bicycle to many people
    however she will let a friend use it
  2. holy cross church must of purchases the twenty
    nine trees for its landscaping porject

25
DOL 13-Corrections
  1. Cindy doesnt lend her bicycle to many people
    however, she will let a friend use it.
  2. Holy Cross Church must have purchased twenty-nine
    trees for its landscaping project.

26
DOL 14
  1. this here quote appeared on the poster be not the
    first whom the new is tried
  2. the sun will rose over the catskill mountains by
    610 AM tomorrow

27
DOL 14-Corrections
  1. This quote appeared on the poster Be not the
    first whom the new is tried.
  2. The sun will have risen over the Catskill
    Mountains by 610 A.M. tomorrow.

28
DOL 15
  1. that woman who is buying a ticket must like to
    travel a lot because she has went to europe every
    summer for the past ten years
  2. i ran farther then the other forty nine people i
    believe

29
DOL 15
  1. That woman buying a ticket must like to travel a
    lot because she has gone to Europe every summer
    for the past ten years.
  2. I ran farther than the other forty-nine people, I
    believe.

30
DOL 16
  1. has sarah took my book again asked george angrily
  2. this rose colored dish was gave to my mother and
    i by my Aunt who lives in savannah

31
DOL 16-Corrections
  1. Has Sarah taken my book again?asked George
    angrily.
  2. This rose-colored dish was given to my mother and
    me by my aunt who lives in Savannah.

32
DOL 25
  1. after finishing a note to jan the pen was put
    away by gloria
  2. on vacation at stone lake the bailey family
    enjoyed boating swimming to fish and to hike

33
DOL 25- Corrections
  1. After finishing a note to Jan, Gloria put the pen
    away.
  2. On vacation to Stone Lake, the Bailey family
    enjoyed boating, swimming, fishing, and hiking.

34
DOL 21
  1. she should of chose the best of the two plays
    which was life with father
  2. juan stated me and my sister are reading the
    interesting novel the prince and the pauper

35
DOL 21- Corrections
  1. She should have chosen the better of the two
    plays, which was Life with Father.
  2. Juan stated, My sister and I are reading the
    interesting novel The Prince and the Pauper.

36
DOL 23
  • 320 merlin circle
  • cicinnati oh 45200
  • july 23 1989
  • dear bill
  • do you have a sleeping bag i can lend when we
    goes camping together
  • sincerely
  • john

37
DOL 23-Corrections
  • 320 Merlin Circle
  • Cincinnati OH 45200
  • July 23, 1989
  • Dear Bill,
  • Do you have a sleeping bag I can borrow when
    we go camping together?
  • Sincerely,
  • John

38
DOL 25
  1. the job requires a person who can take dictation
    use office machines type fast and a person to
    work with customers
  2. the pipes freezed i learned because this here
    furnace didnt work proper

39
DOL 25- Corrections
  1. The job requires a person who can take dictation,
    use office machines, type fast, and work with
    customers.
  2. The pipes froze, I learned, because this furnace
    didnt work properly.

40
DOL 26
  1. they havent never found the most valuable of the
    too stole paintings
  2. if you want to see an interesting Television
    program than watch thriller theater on thursday
    evenings

41
DOL 26-Corrections
  1. The haven't ever found the more valuable of the
    two paintings.
  2. If you want to see an interesting television
    program, the watch Thriller Theater on Thursday
    evenings.

42
DOL 27
  1. i would of drew the outline but i didnt have
    nothing to draw with
  2. me and barry visited cliff st in the afternoon
    and then in the evening we go to the movie willow

43
DOL 27-Corrections
  1. I would have drawn the outline, but I didnt have
    anything to draw with.
  2. Barry and I visited Cliff St. in the afternoon,
    and in the evening we went to the movie Willow.

44
DOL 28
  1. on august 28 1988 we visited donna and her mother
    at 7213 ninth avenue seattle washington
  2. shes certainly doing good in her new job at the
    waxford tire co

45
DOL 28- Corrections
  1. On August 28, 1988, we visited Donna and her
    mother at 7213 Ninth Avenue, Seattle, Washington.
  2. Shes certainly doing well in her new job at the
    Waxford Tire Co.

46
DOL 29
  1. the abandoned house that no one is living in is
    located on the southern part of boulder colorado
  2. i think the Mountains in the east is beautiful
    but mom thinks the ones in the west is most
    beautiful

47
DOL 29- Corrections
  1. The abandoned house is located in the southern
    part of Boulder, Colorado.
  2. I think the mountains in the East are beautiful,
    but Mom thinks the ones in the West are more
    beautiful.

48
DOL 30
  1. the battle of the alamo is a Historic event of
    interest to many texans
  2. she dont go to india in the summer because it
    too hot instead she travels to norway

49
DOL 30- Corrections
  1. The Battle of the Alamo is a historical event of
    interest to many Texans.
  2. She doesnt go to India in the summer because its
    too hot instead, she travels to Norway.

50
DOL 31
  1. you have to many simple sentences in this
    paragraph jeff vary youre sentences for a better
    paragraph
  2. the poem october is a serious poem written by
    robert frost in the twentieth century

51
DOL 31- Corrections
  1. You have too many simple sentences in this
    paragraph, Jeff vary your sentences for a better
    paragraph.
  2. The poem October is a serious poem written by
    Robert Frost in the twentieth century.

52
Week 6 Day 1
  1. we divided the project between the five of us but
    were not sure well finish on time prof jackson
  2. will you lend me fifty cents to make the bus to
    brownell park

53
Week 6 Day 1
  1. We divided the project among the five of us, but
    were not sure well finish on time, Prof.
    Jackson.
  2. Will you lend my fifty-five cents to take the bus
    to Brownell Park.?

54
Week 6 Day 2
  1. hes going to his best Friends house to pick up
    the novel the outsiders
  2. because aunt alice and him went to somerset inn
    for lunch and the stopped outside of the marine
    back to talk to nicks friend

55
Week 6 Day 2
  1. Hes going to his best friends house to pick up
    the novel The Outsiders.
  2. Aunt Alice and he went to the Somerset Inn for
    lunch and then stopped outside the Marine bank to
    talk to Nicks friend.

56
Week 6 Day 3
  1. after she rang the bell many times she gives up
    and left these items by the door cookies fudge
    and cake
  2. he has gave subscriptions to newsweek as
    christmas gifts for twenty nine years i think

57
Week 6 Day 3
  1. After she had rung the bell many times, she gave
    up and left these items by the door cookies,
    fudge, and cake.
  2. He has given subscriptions to Newsweek as
    Christmas gifts for twenty-nine years.

58
Week 6 Day 4
  • moon river has been a popular song for more than
    twenty five years i think
  • my car had a flat tire i was late for the movie
    the last emperor

59
Week 6 Day 4
  1. Moon River has been a popular song for more
    than twenty-five years, I think.
  2. Since my car had a flat tire, I was late for the
    movie The Last Emperor.

60
Week 6 day 5
  1. i seen my father fix the faucet standing in the
    door
  2. them students they are reading the article
    entitled pollution on the rise

61
Week 6 Day 5
  1. Standing in the door, I saw my father fix the
    faucet.
  2. They are reading the article entitled Pollution
    on the Rise.

62
Week 7 Day 1
  1. she arent to concerned about reading the short
    story the gift of the magi shell see it on
    television next tuesday
  2. they would of rode the cable car at niagara falls
    but they refused to wait in the long line thier

63
Week 7 Day 1
  1. She isn't too concerned about reading the short
    story The Gift of the Magi shell see it on
    television next Tuesday.
  2. They would have ridden in the cable car at
    Niagara Falls, but they refused to wait in the
    long line there.

64
Week 7 Day 2
  1. the young girl who was six years old was trapped
    inside of the empty closet which had nothing in
    it
  2. mrs vetter told us to do the following read the
    assignment take notes and write a Report

65
Week 7 Day 2
  1. The six-year-old girl was trapped inside the
    empty closet.
  2. Mrs. Vetter told us to do the following read the
    assignment, take notes, and write a report.

66
Week 7 Day 3
  • brittania record company
  • 7321 westridge boulevard
  • los angeles ca 90049
  • ladies and gentemen
  • please send me youre latest catalog
  • sincerely
  • jennifer riley

67
Week 7 Day 3
  • Brittania Record Company
  • 7321 Westridge Boulevard
  • Los Angeles, CA 90049
  • Ladies and Gentlemen
  • Please send me youre latest catalog.
  • Sincerely,
  • Jennifer riley

68
Week 7 Day 4
  1. she dont want to leave we too kids attend the
    football game weve been gone to much recently
  2. leave the book playing dead lay on the shelf
    until your ready to read it said mr arnold

69
Week 7 Day 4
  1. She doesn't want to let us two kids attends the
    football game weve been gone too much recently.
  2. Let the book Playing Dead lie on the shelf until
    you're ready to read it, said Mr. Arnold.

70
Week 7 Day 5
  1. we read the poem paul reveres ride and the we
    started the novel lillies of the field in english
    class
  2. one of picassos most famous paintings guernica
    were at the museum of modern art

71
Week 7 Day 5
  1. We read the poem Paul Reveres Ride, and then
    we started the novel Lilies of the Field in
    English class.
  2. One of Picassos most famous paintings, Guernica,
    was at the Museum of Modern Art.

72
Week 8 Day 1
  1. before 230 PM miss spencer will have chose the
    students who will appear in the play a christmas
    carol
  2. his plants have growed good because he has kept
    this here garden free of all harmful Insects

73
Week 8 Day 1
  1. Before 230 P.M. Miss Spencer will have chosen
    the students who will appear in the play A
    Christmas Carol.
  2. His plants have grown well because he has kept
    this garden free from harmful insects.

74
Week 8 Day 2
  1. if i had knowed the you were hear you could of
    spoke about your trip to russia
  2. have you swam across emerald lake before asked
    ethel

75
Week 8 Day 2
  1. If i had known you were here, you could have
    spoken about your trip to Russia.
  2. Have you swum across Emerald Lake before? asked
    Ethel.

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Week 8 Day 3
  1. roger has did that imitation for them children
    many times his next act however is new
  2. which of the girls val or nancy has throwed the
    ball farthest today

77
Week 8 Day 3
  1. Roger has done that imitation for those children
    many times his next act, however, is new.
  2. Which of the girls, Val or Nancy, has thrown the
    ball farther today?

78
Week 8 Day 4
  1. i havent began to do no homework tonight because
    my father said that im to clean my room first
  2. irregardless of how poorly she played she won the
    game for we juniors when the ball slided threw
    the net

79
Week 8 Day 4
  1. I haven't begun to do any homework tonight
    because my father said that Im to clean my room
    first.
  2. Regardless of how poorly she splayed, she won the
    game for us juniors when the ball slid through
    the net.

80
Week 8 Day 5
  1. on august 23 1987 our boathouse which was built
    for years ago on lake michigans eastern shore
    burned down
  2. there is one poem that appeals to me it is
    entitled annabel lee by edgar allan poe

81
Week 8 Day 5
  1. On August 23, 1987, our boathouse, which was
    built four years ago on Lake Michigans eastern
    shore, burned down.
  2. One poem that appeals to me is entitled Annabel
    Lee by Edgar Allan Poe.

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  • Week 9 Day 2
  • i should of knowed that sean and me would have to
    deliver the milwaukee journal on easter
  • among the to girls it was agreed that bettys
    mother is the better cook in the neighborhood

84
  1. I should have known that Sean and I would have to
    deliver the Milwaukee Journal on Easter.
  2. Between the two girls it was agreed that Bettys
    mother is the best cook in the neighborhood.

85
  • Week 9 Day 2
  • the song st louis blues has been popular for a
    long time because many famous singers have sang
    it
  • she went inside of the haunted house but she
    wouldnt go down in the basement said joan

86
  1. The song St. Louis Blues has been popular for a
    long time because many famous singers have sung
    it.
  2. She went inside the haunted house, but she
    wouldnt go down into the basement, Joan said.

87
  • Week 9 Day 3
  • is the people in the south more friendly then
    those in the north
  • she must of did her packing early mother since
    she left for boston at 830 AM

88
  1. Are the people in the South more friendly than
    those in the North?
  2. She must have done her packing early, Mother,
    since she left for Boston at 830 A.M.

89
  • Week 9 Day 4
  • who has broke this chair again shouted mom it is
    an antique that I price and like very much
  • we have wrote our rough Drafts and now we have
    alot of revising to do

90
  1. Who has broken this chair again? shouted Mom.
    It was an antique that I prize.
  2. We have written our rough drafts, and now we have
    a lot of revising to do.

91
  • Week 9 Day 5
  • that boy who is very independent never asks for
    any favors and dont like to do none for others
  • they should of went to see that play julius
    ceasar when it was at the orpheum theater

92
  1. That very independent boy never asks for any
    favors and doesnt like to do any for others.
  2. They should have gone to see the play Julius
    Caesar when it was at the Orpheum Theater.

93
  • Week 10 Day 1

  • 222 pine lane

  • brevard nc 28712

  • december 18 1988
  • dear aunt hazel
  • me and mother would love to spend a week with
    you and uncle richard at hilton head island
    during the summer

94

  • 222 Pine Lane

  • Brevard, NC 28712

  • December 18, 1988
  • Dear Aunt Hazel,
  • Mother and I would love to spend a week with
    you and Uncle Richard at Hilton Head Island
    during the summer.

95
  • Week 10 Day 2
  • on march 9 1979 the divers found valuable coins
    that are later discussed in the article famous
    spanish doublooons
  • since im not sure can you tell me if marco polo
    died in ad 1324

96
  1. On March 9, 1979, the divers found valuable coins
    that were later discussed in the article Famous
    Spanish Doubloons.
  2. Since Im not sure, can you tell me if Marco Polo
    died in A.D. 1324?

97
  • Week 10 Day 3
  • she couldnt of ran any better however she lost
    the race
  • someones wallet was left hear yesterday after the
    highland glee club had sang

98
  1. She couldnt have run any better however, she
    lost the race.
  2. Someones wallet was left here yesterday after
    the Highland Glee Club had sang.

99
  • Week 10 Day 4
  • keep proper margins when you write said the
    Teacher and also pay attention to youre
    handwriting
  • the prophet muhammed who was the founder of the
    islamic religion preached belief in allah

100
  1. Keep proper margins when you write, said the
    teacher, and also pay attention to your
    handwriting.
  2. The prophet Muhammed, founder of the Islamic
    religion, preached belief in Allah.

101
  • Week 10 Day 5
  • you can travel to spokane washington on highway
    95 I believe
  • being an architect must be exciting for example
    think of designing the empire state building in
    new york city

102
  1. You can travel to Spokane, Washington, on Highway
    95, I believe.
  2. Being an architect must be exciting for example,
    think of designing the Empire State Building in
    New York City.

103
  • Week 11 Day 1
  • amy remarked gwen hasnt wrote since she moved to
    rochester new york
  • my father has chose the hadley travel agency to
    plan a two week vacation in spain and portugal

104
  1. Amy remarked, Gwen hasnt written since she
    moved to Rochester, New York.
  2. My father has chosen the Hadley Travel Agency to
    plan a two-week vacation in Spain and Portugal.

105
  • Week 11 Day 2
  • im angry with my dog freckles which we buyed for
    seventy five dollars in grand rapids last year
  • to finish the float on time well need to buy more
    lumber paint and nails

106
  1. Im angry with my dog Freckles, which we bought
    for seventy-five dollars in Grand Rapids last
    year.
  2. To finish the float on time, well need to buy
    more lumber, paint, and nails.

107
  • Week 11 Day 3
  • at a theater on locust blvd ann seen a movie
    about the great depression
  • dr manning sayed that food clothing and health
    supplies will be sent by us to south america on
    the twenty first of january

108
  1. At a theater on Locust Blvd., Ann saw a movie
    about the Great Depression.
  2. Dr. Manning said that we will send food,
    clothing, and health supplies to South America on
    the twenty-first of January.

109
  • Week 11 Day 4
  • in the book arctic adventure a dog that had froze
    during a blizzard was let behind
  • russian is a difficult Language I havent never
    understood it

110
  1. In the book Artic Adventure a dog that had frozen
    during a blizzard was left behind.
  2. Because Russian is a difficult language, I
    (havent ever or have never) understood it.

111
  • Week 11 Day 5
  • jackie has drew a picture of a ship in the harbor
    at mystic connecticut the ship dont look very
    big
  • 2. them cats hasnt never let that dog come near
    there food

112
  1. Jackie has drawn a picture of a ship in the
    harbor at Mysitc, Connecticut the ship doesnt
    look very big.
  2. (Those or These) cats (havent ever or have
    never) let that dog come near their food.

113
  • Week 12 Day 2
  • hasnt me patterson never borrowed you her copy
    of julia childs book the art of french cooking
  • a book about harry truman a former President was
    found outside of the school

114
  1. Hasnt Mr. Patterson ever lent you her copy of
    Julia Childs book The Art of French Cooking?
  2. A book about Harry Truman, a former President,
    was found outside the school.

115
  • Week 12 Day 2
  • me and prof adams catched a large lizard in
    arizona however it fighted hard and escaped
  • them children misplaced our tv guide and dad
    couldnt find it to see if wild world of animals
    was scheduled

116
  1. Prof. Adams and I caught a large lizard in
    Arizona however, it fought hard and escaped.
  2. (Those or These) children misplaced our TV Guide,
    and Dad couldnt find it to see if Wild World of
    Animals was scheduled.

117
  • Week 12 Day 3
  • i learned more about poetry when we studied casey
    at the bat then I learn from the other poems
  • finding camping enjoyable one of my friends have
    decided to join the boy scouts of america a
    worthwhile organization

118
Week 12 Day 3 1. I learned more about poetry
when we studied Casey at the Bat than I learned
from the other poem. 2. Finding camping
enjoyable, one of my friends has decided to join
the Boy Scouts of America, a worthwhile
organization.
119
  • Week 12 Day 4
  • serfs bore many hardships in england during the
    middle ages and didnt have no freedom
  • as we was setting at a table in mi casa a
    waitress brings a bowl of corn chips

120
  1. Serfs bore many hardships in England during the
    Middle Ages and (didnt have any or had no)
    freedom.
  2. As we were sitting at a table in Mi Casa, a
    waitress brought a bowl of corm chips.

121
  • Week 12 Day 5
  • the longer of the three articles was excellent
    the article described a landslide in the rocky
    mountains
  • each of the Students did their own research about
    world war 1

122
  1. The longest of the three articles, which
    described a landslide in the Rocky mountains, was
    excellent.
  2. Each of the students did his or her own research
    about World War 1.

123
  • Week 13 Day 1
  • doesnt me and gary have the more interesting
    article you have ever read in the school
    newspaper mother
  • to reach sarahs house in dallas irene goes south
    on highway 20 and then took that highway west

124
  1. Dont Gary and I have the most interesting
    article you have ever read in the school
    newspaper, Mother?
  2. To reach Sarahs house in Dallas, Irene goes
    south on highway 20 and then takes that highway
    west.

125
Week 13 Day 2
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Week 27 DOL
  1. we leaved for hartsfield airport at 530 PM and
    flied to london we landed in london at 1030 AM
  2. we seen mont blanc we seen it while we was
    crossing the alps in france

127
  1. We left for Hartsfield Airport at 530 P.M. and
    flew to London, were we landed at 1030 A.M.
  2. We saw Mont Blanc while crossing the Alps in
    France.

128
DOL
  1. prof nelson went to the skylight theater and seen
    the film the seventh seal a classic directed by
    ingmar bergman
  2. because a bee stinged grace before she could
    avoid it

129
  • Prof. Nelson went to the Skylight Theater and saw
    the film The Seventh Seal, a classic directed by
    Ingmar Bergman.
  • A bee stung Grace before she could avoid it.

130
DOL
  1. in the northeast their were some pro-british
    feelings during the revolutionary war
  2. sarah may of forgot to return her brothers
    goggles before the swim meat

131
  • In the Northeast there were some pro-British
    feelings during the Revolutionary War.
  • Sarah may of forgotten to return her brothers
    goggles before the swim meet.

132
DOL
  1. i and my sister finded an old harmonica we
    learned to play the old harmonica good
  2. several times mother has sat aside Strawberries
    she has growed and has forgot to serve them

133
  1. My sister and I found an old harmonica, which we
    learned to play well.
  2. Several times mother has sat aside strawberries
    she has grown them and forgotten to serve them.

134
DOL
  • 0420 potomac dr
  • topeka ks 06660
  • february 21 1989
  • mystery book club
  • 4102 kelly ave
  • portland or 97201

135
  • 0420 Potomac Dr.
  • Topeka KS 06660
  • February 21, 1989
  • Mystery Book Club
  • 4102 Kelly Ave.
  • Portland, OR 97201

136
DOL
  1. for many years on labor day we have drove to
    maple wisconsin the brule river is near this town
  2. yes i have frequently gave aunt rita clippings
    from the harrisburg star fay said

137
  1. For many years on Labor Day, we have driven to
    Maple, Wisconsin, a town near the Brule River.
  2. Yes I have frequently given Aunt Rita clippings
    from the Harrisburg Star, Fay said.

138
DOL
  1. our Choir hasnt never sang as st pauls lutheran
    church on the corner of state st and carlton ave
  2. the larger collection of indian relics is located
    in the southwest smaller colletions can be found
    elsewhere

139
  • Our choir has never sung at St. Pauls Lutheran
    Church on the corner of State St. and Carlton
    Ave.
  • The larger collection of Indian relics is located
    in the Southwest smaller collections can be
    found elsewhere.

140
DOL
  1. for to weeks he has knowed that these here items
    are on sale sweaters slacks and shoes
  2. on monday at hidden valley park we played
    baseball at the same time our parents set under a
    tree it was shady

141
  1. For two weeks he has known that these items are
    on sale sweaters, slacks, and shoes.
  2. On Monday at Hidden Valley Park, we played
    baseball while our parents sat under a shady tree.

142
DOL
  1. the poem a fly was wrote during the restoration
    in england when charles II returned to the throne
  2. my parents they have went to highbridge middle
    school and spoke to my teachers several times

143
  • The poem A Fly was written during the
    Restoration in England when Charles II returned
    to the throne.
  • My parents have gone to Highbridge Middle School
    and spoken to my teachers several times.

144
DOL
  1. in the short story lost in paris the main
    character set and looked at notre dame the famous
    cathedral for a long time
  2. when dad shut a second story window a plant fell
    of the ledge and crashed below

145
  1. In the short story Lost in Paris the main
    character sat and looked at Notre Dame, the
    famous cathedral, for a long time.
  2. When Dad shut a second-story window, a plant fell
    of the ledge and crashed below.

146
DOL
  1. when we was in selma last april we eat at the
    ryan house a restaurant their
  2. our Teacher teached us that the industrial
    revolution began in england

147
  1. When we was in Selma last April, we ate at the
    Ryan House, a restaurant there.
  2. Our teacher taught us that the Industrial
    Revolution began in England.

148
DOL
  • fashion masters, inc
  • 3824 delaware st
  • providence ri 02920
  • dear sir or madam
  • please enter my name in youre grand sweepstakes
    contest
  • sincerely

149
  • Fashion Masters, Inc
  • 3824 Delaware St.
  • Providence RI 02920
  • Dear Sir or Madam
  • Please enter my name in your Grand Sweepstakes
    Contest.
  • Sincerely,

150
DOL
  1. one of the children were hurt on that there slid
    said mrs jenkins
  2. arthur should of wrote to he and cal irregardless
    of his dislike for writing

151
  • One of the children was hurt on that slide,
    said Mrs. Jenkins.
  • Arthur should have written to Cal and him
    regardless of his dislike for writing.

152
DOL
  1. yes i like swimming to golf and fishing
  2. nicky breaked a japanese vase and taked it to the
    fixit shop on peachtree boulevard

153
  • Yes, I like swimming, golfing, and fishing.
  • Nicky broke a Japanese vase and taked it to the
    Fixit Shop on Peachtree Boulevard.

154
DOL
  1. she lay the paper on the porch passing by the
    house
  2. my grandmother hasnt never losed her faith in
    god

155
  1. Passing by the house, she laid the paper on the
    porch.
  2. my grandmother has never lost her faith in God.

156
DOL
  1. st peters church is the more modern of the
    catholic churches in san francisco
  2. his chest was sunburned so bad on coney island
    that now he must lay on his back

157
  • St. Peters church is the most modern of the
    Catholic churches in San Francisco.
  • His chest was sunburned so badly on Coney Island
    that now he must lie on his back.

158
DOL
  1. the beach boys ate at the regency hotel before
    they singed at foster auditorium
  2. officer smith I said me and sally doesnt know
    whom torn down the poster on the corner of maple
    st and hadley rd

159
  • The Beach Boys had eaten at the Regency Hotel
    before they sang at Foster Auditorium.
  • Officer Smith, I said, sally and I dont know
    who torn down the poster on the corner of Maple
    St. and Hadley Rd.

160
DOL
  1. my Uncle learned me to choose between many apples
    to find the better ones
  2. in washington dc dad leaded us through the
    library of congress

161
  • My uncle taught me to choose among many apples to
    find the best ones.
  • In Washington, D.C. Dad led us through the
    Library of Congress.

162
DOL
  1. isnt youre sister doing nothing about finding my
    book the slave trader
  2. that there man he thinks that the girls
    theirselves should pay for the window they had
    breaked

163
  1. Is your sister doing nothing about finding my
    book The Slave Trader?
  2. He thinks that the girls themselves should pay
    for the window they had broken.

164
DOL
  1. two old copies of longfellows long poem
    evangeline are in dr mellons library
  2. the westlake womens club will right a request mrs
    dillon for thirty five brochures

165
  1. Two old copies of Longfellows long poem
    Evangeline are in Dr. Mellons library.
  2. The Westlake Womens Club will write a request
    Mrs. Dillon for thirty-five brochures.

166
DOL
  1. me and my sister have went to the minnesota state
    fair and have rode on the farris wheel for the
    past too years
  2. the members theirselves rose the money to see the
    play the miracle worker

167
  • For the past two years my sister and I have gone
    to the Minnesota State Fair and have ridden on
    the Farris Wheel.
  • The members themselves raised the money to see
    the play The Miracle Worker.

168
DOL
  • has mayor davis gave his speech about the role of
    the french in world war I
  • yesterday ms sutton breaked a light bulb
    consequently she bought a new one for fifty seven
    cents

169
  • Has Mayor Davis given his speech about the role
    of the French in World War I?
  • Yesterday Ms. Sutton broke a light bulb
    consequently, she bought a new one for
    fifty-seven cents.

170
DOL
  1. either he left someone use the boat or it has
    sank
  2. my german shepherd prince has shook that pillow
    until its almost in shreds

171
  • Either he let someone use the boat, or it has
    sunk.
  • My German shepherd Prince has shaken that pillow
    until its almost in shreds.

172
DOL
  1. the criminal runned down turner blvd and headed
    East toward highway 68
  2. they havent did nothing about changing the rule
    requiring a two thirds majoity

173
  • The criminal ran down Turner Blvd. and headed
    east toward Highway 68.
  • They have done nothing about changing the rule
    requiring a two-thirds majority.

174
DOL
  1. at 900 PM this evening frank sinatra the singer
    who sings songs will sing my way a song he made
    famous and well-known
  2. for who have you drew that picture of cliffs in
    new mexico

175
  1. At 900 P.M. Frank Sinatra, the singer, will sing
    My Way, a song he made famous.
  2. For whom have you drawn that picture of cliffs in
    New Mexico?

176
DOL
  1. my cousin has began writing in spanish to a
    mexican pen pal and just taked a letter to the
    glenveiw post office
  2. mother brang some pretzels to we girls after we
    had did the work

177
  • My cousin has begun writing in Spanish to a
    Mexican pen pal and just took a letter to the
    Glenview Post Office.
  • Mother brought some pretzels to us girls after we
    had done the work.

178
DOL
  1. when our cat and dog fought at junction park dad
    throwed a stick to break them apart
  2. once we were outside of the cabin we continued
    cleaning the boat loading our gear and to pack
    the life preservers

179
  • When our cat and dog fought at Junction Park dad
    threw a stick to break them apart.
  • Once we were outside of the cabin, we continued
    cleaning the boat, loading our gear, and to pack
    the life preservers.

180
DOL
  1. ms talbot said that she had parked youre toyota
    outside of the gateway transportation company
  2. our Club rose nighty eight dollars for the
    american red cross we recived a letter of thanks

181
  1. Ms. Talbot said that she had parked your Toyota
    outside the Gateway Transportation Company.
  2. Since our club rose ninety-eight dollars for the
    American Red Cross, we received a letter of
    thanks.

182
DOL
  1. i didnt have no time too watch cheers on
    television
  2. i borrowed a tape to keith I also borrowed him
    several books

183
  1. I didnt have have any time to watch Cheers on
    television.
  2. I lent Keith a tape and several books.

184
DOL
  1. the article parents and their children is
    controversial readers have conflicting opinions
    about it
  2. they brung back colored sand from the grand
    canyon which they had visited recent

185
  • The article Parents and Their Children is
    controversial readers have conflicting opinions
    about it.
  • They brought back colored sand from the Grand
    Canyon, which they had visited recently.

186
DOL
  1. when we visited our friends in the west we eat
    several types of fruit they had grew oranges
    plums and grapes
  2. the babysitter had took the children to see the
    mummys curse and they goed to the ice-cream store
    afterward

187
  • When we visited our friends in the West, we ate
    several types of fruit they had grown oranges,
    plums, and grapes.
  • The baby sitter had taken the children to see the
    Mummys Curse and they went to the ice-cream
    store afterward.

188
DOL
  1. the picture that mother sat on the table showed
    an airplane in front of mt kilimanjaro a mountain
    in africa
  2. because our Neighbors barrowed me there map of
    houston to locate the astrodome

189
  1. The picture that Mother set on the table showed
    an airplane in front of Mt. Kilimanjaro a
    mountain in Africa.
  2. Our neighbors lent me a map of Houston to locate
    the Astrodome.

190
DOL
  1. we swum there in august but he hadnt knowed about
    the serious pollution
  2. aunt helen found someones purse were it has been
    leaved after the performance by the vienna boys
    choir

191
  • We swam there in August, but we hadnt known
    about the serious pollution.
  • Aunt Helen found someone's purse were it has been
    left after the performance by the Vienna Boys
    Choir.

192
DOL
  1. me and my friend caught a rabbit inside of a trap
    we had sat in the garden
  2. a bee stung greg greg runs in the house

193
  1. My and I caught a rabbit inside a trap we had set
    in the garden.
  2. A bee stung Greg, and he ran into the house.

194
DOL
  1. them people hadnt never saw the greek folk
    dances before
  2. during his lecture dr wescott read the poem
    justice wrote after the french revolution

195
  • These people had never seen the Greek folk dances
    before.
  • During his lecture Dr. Wescott read the poem
    Justice, written after the French Revolution.

196
DOL
  1. no we havent never drove to the lake of the
    ozarks for the fourth of july mr adams says last
    monday
  2. when i shaked the apple tree a shower of apples
    fell

197
  • No we have never driven to the Lake of the
    Ozarks for the Fourth of July, Mr. Adams said
    last Monday.
  • When I shook the apple tree, a shower of apples
    fell.

198
DOL
  1. we went to there house at 124 winton avenue but
    they had already leaved for the north
  2. the hampton gazette announced that governor
    samson whould speak on Television at 730 PM

199
  1. We went to their house at 124 Winton Avenue, but
    they had already left for the North.
  2. The Hampton Gazette announced that Governor
    Samson would speak on television at 730 P.M.

200
DOL
  1. it was overcast and drizzly we decided not to go
    to bradford beach
  2. because they enjoyed rafting on the snake river
    this year they plan to return to the snake river
    next year

201
  • Since it was overcast and drizzly, we decided not
    to go to Bradford Beach.
  • Because they enjoyed rafting on the Snake River
    this year, they plan to return there next year.

202
DOL
  • i knowed i would recive these gifts for my
    birthday this year a sweater a calculator and a
    basketball
  • entering the theater the smell of popcorn made
    dad hungry

203
  • I knew I would receive these gifts for my
    birthday a sweater, a calculator, and a
    basketball.
  • Entering the theater, Dad smelled the popcorn and
    became hungry.

204
DOL
  1. the guard and the gate taking tickets shouted get
    away from that fence
  2. in march them students will read the short story
    wheldon the weed which was wrote in the twentieth
    century

205
  • The guard taking tickets at the gate shouted,
    Get away from that fence!
  • In march these students will read the short story
    Wheldon the Weed, which was written in the
    twentieth century.

206
DOL
  1. mrs nissen chosed a copy of national geographic
    to learn her students about the australian
    aborigines
  2. maria said i have wrote letters to four of my
    cousins therefore i dont want to write no more
    today

207
  • Mrs. Nissan chose a copy of National Geographic
    to teach her students about the Australian
    Aborigines.
  • Maria said, I have written letters to four of my
    cousins therefore, I dont want to write any
    more today.

208
DOL
  1. have you ever before saw this here oak tree,
    which bursts into color every october
  2. because of the many people at harleys inn a new
    restaurant mom lost her coat

209
  1. Have you ever before seen oak tree, which bursts
    into color every October?
  2. because of the many people at Harleys Inn, a new
    restaurant, Mom lost her coat.

210
DOL
  1. yes i and ella seen that painting in the museum
  2. the bell in the tower of the first baptist church
    is cracked it has not been rang for a long time

211
  • Yes, Ella and I saw that painting in the museum.
  • Because the bell in the tower of the First
    Baptist Church is cracked, it has not been rung
    for a long time.

212
DOL
  1. irregardless of the weather we plan to eat
    breakfast load the car and driving to the cottage
  2. harold couldnt of took youre chinese puzzle and
    broke it down into its parts

213
  1. Regardless of the weather we plan to eat
    breakfast, load the car, and drive to the
    cottage.
  2. Harold couldnt of taken your Chinese puzzle and
    broken it down into its parts.

214
DOL
  1. no he dont plan to stop at mt rushmore on his
    trip to yellowstone park
  2. before the boys could lie the napkins on the
    picnic tables the wind blows them away

215
  1. No, he doesnt plan to stop at Mt. Rushmore on
    his trip to Yellowstone Park.
  2. The wind blew the napkins away before the boys
    could lay them on the picnic tables.

216
DOL
  1. mt everest is the highest peak of the himalayas
    which extend along the border between india and
    tibet
  2. one of the clerks at the first national bank on
    main st in burlington fighted with a robber who
    was catched later

217
  • Mt. Everest is the highest peak of the Himalayas,
    which extend along the border between India and
    Tibet.
  • One of the clerks at the First National Bank on
    Main St. in Burlington fought with a robber who
    was caught later.

218
DOL
  1. neil replied mr hill set down on a bench in
    island park and mr hill started to read a book
  2. last sunday an Article in tv guide highlighted
    the cast of family ties a popular television
    series

219
  • Neil replied, Mr. Hill sat down on a bench in
    Island Park and started to read a book.
  • Last Sunday an article in TV Guide highlighted
    the cast of Family Ties, a popular television
    series.

220
DOL
  1. ms dobek do you think my paragraph has two many
    adjectives
  2. hasnt dad never did nothing about the crack in
    the larger of the four windows

221
  • Ms. Dobek, do you think my paragraph has too many
    adjectives?
  • Has Dad never did anything about the crack in the
    largest of the four windows?

222
DOL
  1. on animal day at the zoo the contest winner had
    to choose between these prizes a stuffed animal a
    transistor radio and a camera
  2. the guide leaded us through crystal onyx cave
    which is quite different from mammoth cave

223
  • On Animal Day at the zoo, the contest winner had
    to choose between these prizes a stuffed animal,
    a transistor radio, and a camera.
  • The guide led us through Crystal Onyx Cave, which
    is quite different from Mammoth Cave.

224
DOL
  1. me and my sister visited ft sumter however we see
    more historical items at ft moultrie
  2. in november we wasnt able to skate at forest
    park the temperature was too high

225
  1. My sister and I visited Ft. Sumter however, we
    saw more historical items at Ft. Moultrie.
  2. In November we werent able to skate at Forest
    Park the temperature was too high.

226
DOL WEEK 28
  1. while my italian relatives was in the united
    states they visited four major cities new york
    philidelphia chicago and san francisco
  2. my dad taked out the windows in the basement and
    my dad has began to repair them

227
ANSWERS
  1. While my Italian relatives was in the United
    States, they visited four major cities New York,
    Philadelphia, Chicago, and San Francisco.
  2. My dad took out the windows in the basement and
    has begun to repair them.

228
WEEK 28
  1. i lended wilmas pattern but I dont think ill
    finish the dress by sunday june 5
  2. his friend he has fell down twice outside of the
    san diego zoo

229
ANSWERS
  1. I barrowed Wilmas pattern, but I dont think
    Ill finish the dress by Sunday, June 5.
  2. His friend has fallen down twice outside of the
    San Diego Zoo.

230
WEEK 28
  1. one episode of wild kingdom on television shown
    how a muskrat rose its young under a stream that
    had froze
  2. loretta and me watched with surprise as the
    Sheriff on television fighted with the outlaw
    throws him to the ground and taking out some rope
    to tie him up

231
ANSWERS
  1. One episode of Wild Kingdom on television showed
    how a muskrat raised its young under a stream
    that had frozen.
  2. Loretta and I watched with surprise as the
    sheriff on television fought with the outlaw,
    throws him to the ground, and took out some rope
    to tie him up.

232
DOL 28
  1. the article fringe benefits stated that general
    engineering provides a cadillac for its
    president
  2. ms oster a mathematics teacher has took a leave
    of absence to study at columbia university

233
ANSWERS
  1. The article Fringe Benefits stated that General
    Engineering provides a Cadillac for its
    president.
  2. Ms. Oster, a mathematics teacher, has taken a
    leave of absence to study at Columbia University.

234
DOL 28
  1. at four oclock your supposed to deliver the box
    of clothes to goodwill industries on summit st
  2. wont his inability to speak german affect his
    chances of securing a job at international
    merchandise

235
ANSWERS
  1. At four oclock youre supposed to deliver the
    box of clothes to Goodwill Industries on Summit
    St.
  2. Wont his inability to speak German affect his
    chances of securing a job at International
    Merchandise?

236
WEEK 28
  1. mr leverson has went with them students from
    allen town junior school to a new production of
    romeo and juliet in portland
  2. eva and cora rided there bikes down hwy 11 to the
    dodge county fair

237
ANSWERS
  • Mr. Leverson has gone with those students from
    Allen Town junior school to a new production of
    Romeo and Juliet in Portland.
  • Eva and Cora rode their bikes down Hwy. 11 to the
    Dodge County Fair.

238
WEEK 29
  1. me and my brother was shook by the earthquake but
    us and our dog duke was alright
  2. nina didnt say nothing after she had breaked the
    recording of the song memories

239
Answers
  1. my brother and I were shaken by the earthquake,
    but we and our dog Duke was all right.
  2. Nina didnt say anything after she had broken the
    recording of the song Memories.

240
WEEK 29
  1. dad forgot about the bread Dough raising on the
    stove and dad took a nap
  2. who did rhonda injure by the way when she cast
    her fishing line into the mississippi river

241
ANSWERS
  1. Dad forgot about the bread dough rising on the
    stove and took a nap.
  2. Whom did Rhonda injure, by the way, when she cast
    her fishing line into the Mississippi River.

242
WEEK 29
  1. the picture charlie drawed was the better of the
    better of the seventy six submitted to the
    bakersfield art fair
  2. i done my work but i lost my paper on the way to
    school confessed perry tearful

243
ASWERS
  1. The picture Charlie drew was the best of the
    seventy-six submitted to the Bakersfield Art
    Fair.
  2. I did my work, but I lost my paper on the way to
    school, confessed Perry tearfully.

244
WEEK 29
  1. the people quickly fleed from the coastal cities
    of tokyo and osaka before the tidal wave striked
  2. mr jameson dont remember however if he has gave
    his contribution to the united fund

245
ANSWERS
  1. The people quickly fled from the coastal cities
    of Tokyo and Osaka before the tidal wave struck.
  2. Mr. Jameson doesnt remember, however, if he has
    given his contribution to the United Fund.

246
WEEK 30
  1. i and my brother teared our pants as we jumped
    over a fence near the garden hotel on a lake
    drive.
  2. dr forrest asked carl and joe if they hurt
    theirselves when they fell threw a window at the
    langston civic center

247
ANSWERS
  1. My brother and I tore our pants as we jumped over
    a fence near the Garden Hotel on a lake drive.
  2. Dr. Forrest asked Carl and Joe if they hurt
    themselves when they fell through a window at the
    Langston Civic Center.

248
WEEK 30
  1. after she had sang one verse of this is my
    country sherrie became hoarse and she couldnt
    sing no more
  2. the responsibility for learning students about
    european history will be divided between three
    teachers

249
ANWERS
  1. After she had sung one verse of This Is My
    Country, Sherrie became hoarse and couldnt sing
    any more.
  2. The responsibility for teaching students about
    European history will be divided among three
    teachers.

250
WEEK 30
  1. larry have you wrote youre Paper about the long
    poem beowulf for english class yet
  2. the michigan cherry growers association
    maintains that cherries one third larger than
    normal are growed here

251
ANSWERS
  1. Larry have you written your paper about the long
    poem Beowulf for English class yet?
  2. The Michigan Cherry Growers Association
    maintains that cherries one- third larger than
    normal are grown here.

252
WEEK 30
  1. you have seven chapters of the call of the wild
    to read before memorial day mr thomas said
  2. mrs olsen has chose to guide a tour to runnymede
    where king john signed the magna charta in ad 1215

253
ANSWERS
  1. You have seven chapters of The Call of The Wild
    to read before Memorial Day, Mr. Thomas said.
  2. Mrs. Olsen has chosen to guide a tour to
    Runnymede where King John signed the Magna Charta
    in A.D. 1215.

254
WEEK 30
  1. no i havent seen none of the pictures from your
    trip to glacier national park said angie
  2. mother and sheila looked at the list of groceries
    that she wanted from the quick food mart

255
ANSWERS
  1. No, I havent seen any of the pictures from your
    trip to Glacier National Park, said Angie.
  2. Mother and Sheila looked at the list of groceries
    that Mother wanted from the Quick Food Mart.

256
WEEK 31
  1. maria and juan is stopping at the el paso public
    library to borrow a copy of the play the taming
    of the shrew from ms rodriguez
  2. us guys sat our baseball gear on the ground at
    river valley park then we eated our lunch

257
ANSWERS
  1. Maria and Juan is stopping at the El Paso Public
    Library to borrow a copy of the play The Taming
    of The Shrew from Ms. Rodriguez.
  2. We guys set our baseball gear on the ground at
    River Valley Park then we ate our lunch.

258
WEEK 31
  1. irregardless of his diet father cant never
    become more thin than I am stated my brother
  2. even though I havent no time to study german I
    still must take the test on Friday june 3

259
ANSWERS
  • Regardless of his diet Father cant ever become
    thinner than I am, stated my brother.
  • Even though I havent any time to study German, I
    still must take the test on Friday, June 3.

260
WEEK 31
  1. there are more people who might of participated
    in the run for your life marathon for the
    american heart association if the event had not
    been postponed
  2. you shouldnt have leaved your renault in france
    foreign cars bring high prices in the united
    states

261
ANSWERS
  • More people might have participated in the Run
    for Your Life Marathon for the American Heart
    Association if the event had not been postponed.
  • You shouldnt have leaved your Renault in France
    because foreign cars bring high prices in the
    United States.

262
WEEK 31
  1. marty was stang by a Hornet while hiking through
    the nicolet national forest
  2. he dont no if the red sox or the orioles won the
    game at fenway park

263
ANSWERS
  • Marty was stung by a hornet while hiking through
    the Nicolet National Forest.
  • He doesnt know if the Red Sox or the Orioles won
    the game at Fenway Park.

264
WEEK 31
  1. after I had drank a box of the boys hi-c by
    mistake they was very angry with me
  2. during the teachers interesting lecture I began
    to imagine that I was on a safari in africa

265
ANSWERS
  • After I had drunk a box of the boys Hi-C by
    mistake, they were very angry with me.
  • During the teachers interesting lecture I began
    to imagine that I was on a safari in Africa
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