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Title: CCOT essay


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CCOT essay
  • Plus
  • A (different) sample question answer

2
Read Question carefully!
  • Analyze the social and economic transformations
    that occurred in the Atlantic world as a result
    of new contacts among Western Europe, Africa and
    the Americas from 1492-1750.

3
Clearly note time, place, categories
  • 1492 (why?) 1750
  • Western Europe, Africa, Americas
  • Social, economic

4
Thesis
  • Must be explicit, address all parts of the
    question (including time period) with an argument
    / answer
  • NOT just a restatement of question!
  • Try to put full thesis in introduction (although
    AP readers dont require it)

5
To what extent does this thesis fulfill the
requirements?
6
Essay body Bake the cake
  • Addresses all parts of the question though not
    necessarily evenly or thoroughly (2 or 1)

7
Substantiates thesis with appropriate historical
evidence (2 or 1)
  • Generalizations should be backed up by reference
    to people, places, dates, events, etc. never
    use etc
  • ALL parts of the question require evidence

8
Evidence
  • To what extent does the essay fulfill the core
    requirements?
  • How many pieces of CORRECT information are
    included?

9
Uses relevant world historical context to
explain change /continuity over time
  • Global historical context connections between
    areas, relation to other, similar events/changes

10
World historical context
  • What examples of world/global historical
    context are included in this essay?

11
Analyzes the PROCESS of change over time
  • Explain how/why the change occurred
  • Analyze the process by which the change developed

12
Analysis
  • Where and how does the essay analyze a process?

13
Icing - beyond the core scoring
  • Pays attention to sequence of change
  • Analyzes cause and effect
  • Isnt weaker on one category shows solid
    knowledge on all
  • Provides exceptional amount of historical evidence

14
More icing
  • Links to other relevant events as support also
  • Something exceptional

15
Change words
  • new, novel, fresh, different, transmitted,
    introduced, initiated, brought in, instituted,
    started, then set up, brought an alteration to,
    exchanged, broke the pattern of interaction,
    began, transformed, modified, altered

16
Continuity words
  • non-stop, remained, unremitting, permanent,
    consistently, constant, unbroken, lasting,
    enduring, uninterrupted, continuously,
    maintained, didn't change, persisted, continued,
    remained steady

17
Read Question carefully!
  • Describe and analyze the cultural, economic and
    political impact of Islam on ONE of the following
    regions between 1000 CE and 1750 CE. Be sure to
    discuss a continuity as well as changes.

18
Clearly note time, place, categories
  • 1000CE 1750CE
  • Place CHOICES (only one!!!)
  • WEST AFRICA
  • SOUTH ASIA
  • EUROPE
  • Cultural, economic, political

19
Sample question
  • Analyze the changes and continuities in commerce
    in the Indian Ocean region from 650 C.E. to
    1750 C.E

20
Thesis
  • Must be explicit, address all parts of the
    question (including time period) with an argument
    / answer
  • NOT just a restatement of question!

21
To what extent does this thesis fulfill the
requirements?
  • It fulfills the basic core requirements, but is
    not analytical. no icing for thesis

22
  • Try to put full thesis in introduction (although
    AP readers dont require it)
  • Essay body must also address all parts of the
    question although not necessarily evenly

23
  • Does this essay address all parts of the
    question?
  • How is the essay organized?

24
Substantiates thesis with appropriate historical
evidence
  • Generalizations should be backed up by reference
    to people, places, dates, events, etc. never
    use etc
  • ALL parts of the question require evidence

25
Evidence
  • To what extent does the essay fulfill the core
    requirements?
  • How many pieces of CORRECT information are
    included?
  • Around 10?

26
Uses relevant world historical context to
explain change /continuity over time
  • Global historical context connections between
    areas, relation to other, similar events/changes

27
World historical context
  • What examples of world/global historical
    context are included in this essay?

28
Analyzes the PROCESS of change over time
  • Explain how/why the change occurred
  • Analyze the process by which the change developed

29
Analysis
  • Where and how does the essay analyze a process of
    change?

30
Continuity
  • What remained more or less constant/ the same
    from before the beginning of the time period
    though until the end (within the categories)

31
  • Does the essay effectively address an appropriate
    continuity?

32
Icing - beyond the core scoring
  • Pays attention to sequence of change
  • Analyzes cause and effect
  • Isnt weaker on one category shows solid
    knowledge on all
  • Provides exceptional amount of historical evidence

33
More icing
  • Links to other relevant events as support also
  • Something exceptional
  • Does this essay have icing?

34
Continuity words
  • non-stop, remained, unremitting, permanent,
    consistently, constant, unbroken, lasting,
    enduring, uninterrupted, continuously,
    maintained, didn't change, persisted, continued,
    remained steady

35
Change words
  • new, novel, fresh, different, transmitted,
    introduced, initiated, brought in, instituted,
    started, then set up, brought an alteration to,
    exchanged, broke the pattern of interaction,
    began, transformed, modified, altered
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