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Title: IN OTHER WORDS: mona baker’s perspective on equivalence


1
IN OTHER WORDS mona bakers perspective on
equivalence
Lower Danube University Masters in Translation
and Interpretation Galati 2011
  • Author Haralambie Alina
  • Scientific coordinator PhD. Croitoru Elena

2
Motto
  • Do we really know how we translate or what we
    translate?...Are we to accept naked ideas as
    the means of crossing from one language to
    another?...Translators know they cross over but
    do not know by what sort of bridge. They often
    re-cross by a different bridge to check up again.
    Sometimes they fall over the parapet into limbo.
  • (Firth, 1957197)

3
Mona Bakers equivalence typology
  • Equivalence at word level- the meaning of single
    words and expressions
  • Equivalence above word level- explores
    combinations of words and phrases (stretches of
    language)
  • Grammatical equivalence- deals with grammatical
    categories
  • Textual equivalence- discusses the text level
    (word order, cohesion, etc.)
  • Pragmatic equivalence- how texts are used in
    communicative situations that involves variables
    such as writers, readers, and cultural context.

4
Mona Bakers equivalence typology Equivalence at
word level
  • What does a translator do when there is no word
    in the target language which expresses the same
    meaning as the source language word?
  • Is there a one-to-one relationship between word
    and meaning?
  • There is no one-to-one correspondence between
    orthographic words and elements of meaning within
    or across language
  • eg. words such as tennis player is rendered by
    means of 3 words in Romanian jucator de tenis
    one word in Turkish tenisçi, etc. the verb to
    type- a dactilografia- one word in Romanian
    three words in Spanish pasar a maquina.

5
Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • (a) Culture-specific concepts
  • The source-language word may express a concept
    which is totally unknown in the target language
    (abstract or concrete it may relate to a
    religious belief, a social custom or even a type
    of food).
  • eg. English concept difficult to translate
    Speaker (of the House of Commons)- it has no
    equivalent in many languages, such as Russian,
    Chinese and Arabic, among others. It is often
    translated into Russian as Chairman, which does
    not reflect the role of the Speaker of the House
    of Commons as an independent person who maintains
    authority and order in Parliament.
  • (b) The source-language concept is not
    lexicalized in the target language
  • The source-language word may express a concept
    which is known in the target culture but simply
    not lexicalized, that is not allocated a
    target-language word to express it.
  • eg. the adjective standard (meaning ordinary,
    not extra, as is standard range of products)
    expresses a concept which is very accessible and
    readily understood by most people, yet Arabic has
    no equivalent for it.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • (c) The source-language word is semantically
    complex
  • The source-language word may be semantically
    complex.
  • eg arruação, a Brazilian word which means
    clearing the ground under the coffee trees of
    rubbish and piling it in the middle of the row in
    order to aid in the recovery of beans dropped
    during harvesting (ITI News, 198857).
  • (d) The source and the target languages make
    different distinctions in meaning
  • The target language may make more or fewer
    distinctions in meaning than the source language.
  • eg. Indonesian makes a distinction between going
    out in the rain without the knowledge that is it
    raining (kehujanan) and going out in the rain
    with the knowledge that it is raining
    (hujanhujanan). English does not makes that
    distinction, with the result that if an English
    text referred to going out in the rain, the
    Indonesian translator may find it difficult to
    choose the right equivalent.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • (e) The target language lacks a superordinate
  • The target language may have specific words
    (hyponyms) but no general word (superordinate)to
    head the semantic field.
  • eg. Russian has no read equivalent for
    facilities, meaning any equipment, building,
    services, etc. that are provided for a particular
    activity or purpose. It does, however, have
    several specific words and expressions which can
    be thought of as types of facilities, for example
    sredstva peredvizheniya (means of transport),
    naem (loan), neobkhodimye pomeschcheniya
    (essential accommodation) and neobkhodimoe
    oborudovanie (essential equipment).

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • (f) The target language lacks a specific term
    (hyponym)
  • More commonly, languages tend to have general
    words (superordinates) but lack specific ones
    (hyponyms).
  • eg. under house, English again has a variety of
    hyponyms which have no equivalents in many
    languages, for example bungalow, cottage, croft,
    chalet, lodge, hut, mansion, manor, villa and
    hall.
  • (g) Differences in physical or interpersonal
    perspective
  • Physical perspective has to do with where things
    or people are in relation to one another or to a
    place, as expressed in pairs of words such as
    come/ go, take/ bring, arrive/ depart, etc.
    Perspective may also include the relationship
    between participants in the discourse (tenor).
  • eg. Japanese has six equivalents for give,
    depending on who gives to whom yaru, ageru,
    morau, kureru, itadaku and kudasaru (McCreary,
    1986).

9
Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • h) Differences in expressive meaning
  • There may be a target-language word which has the
    same propositional meaning as the source-language
    word, but it may have a different expressive
    meaning. If the target-language equivalent is
    neutral compared to the source-language item, the
    translator can sometimes add the evaluative
    element by means of a modifier or adverb if
    necessary, or by building it in somewhere else in
    the text.
  • eg. the rendering of the English verb to batter
    (as in child/ wife battering) by the more neutral
    Japanese verb tataku, meaning to beat plus an
    equivalent modifier such as savagely or
    ruthlessly.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • (i) Difference in form
  • There is often no equivalent in the target
    language for a particular form in the source
    text.
  • eg. English makes frequent use of suffixes such
    as ish (e.g. boyish, hellish, greenish) and
    able (e.g. conceivable, retrievable, drinkable).
    Arabic, for instance, has no ready mechanism for
    producing such forms and so they are often
    replaced by an appropriate paraphrase, depending
    on the meaning they convey (e.g. retrievable as
    can be retrieved and drinkable as suitable for
    drinking).
  • (j) Differences in frequency and purpose of using
    specific forms
  • Even when a particular form does have a ready
    equivalent in the target language, there may be a
    difference in the frequency with which it is used
    or the purpose for which it is used.
  • eg. English, for instance, uses the continuous
    ing form for binding clauses much more
    frequently than other languages which have
    equivalents for it, for example German and the
    Scandinavian languages. Consequently, rendering
    every ing form in an English source text with an
    equivalent ing form in a German, Danish or
    Swedish target text would result in stilted,
    unnatural style.

11
Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Common problems of non-equivalence
  • (k) The use of loan words in the source text
  • Words such as au fait, chic and alfresco in
    English are used for their prestige value,
    because they add an air of sophistication to the
    text or its subject matter. This is often lost in
    translation because it is not always possible to
    find a loan word with the same meaning in the
    target language.
  • eg. dilettante is a loan word in English, Russian
    and Japanese but Arabic has no equivalent loan
    word. This means that only the propositional
    meaning of dilettante can be rendered into
    Arabic its stylistic effect would almost
    certainly have to be sacrificed.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (a) Translation by a more general word
    (superordinate)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Shampoo the hair with a mild WELLA-SHAMPOO and
    lightly towel dry. (English- ST)
  • Lavar el cabello con un champú suave de WELLA y
    frotar ligeramente con una toalla. (Spanish-TT)
  • Wash hair with a mild WELLA shampoo and rub
    lightly with a towel. (English back translation)
  • You can wash a lot of things, but you can only
    shampoo your hair.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • Translation by a more general word
    (superordinate) (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • He produced a pocketbook and I thought for a
    moment he was going to tip me. His face was as
    gloomy as an El Greco insufferably bored,
    decades of boredom, and probably, I decided,
    insufferably boring. He didn't tip me, but placed
    the ferrule carefully inside the wallet, and then
    politely asked me who I was, and, fulsomely,
    where I had learnt such excellent French.
    (English ST- from The Magus, by Fowles, John.
    1965 129)
  • A scos un portofel si m-am temut o clipa ca vrea
    sa ma rasplateasca. Obrazul lui era întunecos ca
    un El Greco, nesuferit de plictisit dupa decenii
    de viata plicticoasa si mi-am zis în sinea mea ca
    omul era plicticos la culme. Nu mi-a dat nimic, a
    asezat obiectul metalic în portofel si m-a
    întrebat politicos si cu ipocrizie cine sînt si
    cu falsitate unde învatasem o franceza atît de
    buna. (Romanian TT- from Magicianul, by Fowles,
    John, translated by Deac, Livia and Chitoran,
    Mariana. Iasi Polirom, 2002 126)
  • The term ferrule (capat metalic al bastonului)
    was translated by means of a more general term
    obiect metalic.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (b) Translation by a more neutral/ less
    expressive word
  • EXAMPLE
  • Many of the species growing wild here are
    familiar to us as plants cultivated in European
    gardens- species like this exotic lily. (English
    ST)
  • We are very familiar with many varieties of the
    wild life here, they are the kind grown in
    European gardens- varieties like this strange
    unique lily flower. (back-translated from
    Chinese)
  • Exotic has no equivalent in Chinese and other
    oriental languages. It is a word used by
    westerners to refer to unusual, interesting
    things which come from a distant country such as
    China. The Orient does not have a concept of what
    is exotic in this sense and the expressive
    meaning of the word is therefore lost in
    translation.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • Translation by a more neutral/ less expressive
    word (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • În araturi adâci
  • tarina
  • deschide gura.
  • (Romanian ST- Smarandache, Floretin- Clopotul
    tacerii/ Silences bell/ Le cloche du silence,
    trilingual edition, Phoenix XIQUAN Publishing
    House, 1993 37)
  • Through deep ploughings
  • the field
  • opens its mouth.
  • (English TT- Smarandache, Floretin- Clopotul
    tacerii/ Silences bell/ Le cloche du silence,
    trilingual edition, translated by Stefanescu,
    Rodica and Benea, Stefan, Phoenix XIQUAN
    Publishing House, 1993 37)
  • DISADVANTAGES
  • the term loses all the positive connotations
    associated with the Romanian word
  • the register (archaic and religious, in Romanian)
    is not rendered in English. (back-translation
    form English teren- neutral register,
    contemporary English)

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (c) Translation by cultural substitution
  • It involves replacing a culture-specific item or
    expression with a target-language item which does
    not have the same propositional meaning but is
    likely to have a similar impact on the target
    reader.
  • Advantage it gives the reader a concept with
    which s/he can identify, something familiar and
    appealing.
  • eg. the Romanian equivalent of The Grim Reaper is
    not seceratorul nemilos, but doamna cu coasa, as
    the Romanian culture has personified death by
    granting it feminine attributes, whereas the
    Anglo-Saxon world views death as male character.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • Translation by cultural substitution (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • The Patrick Collection has restaurant facilities
    to suit every taste- from the discerning gourmet,
    to the Cream Tea expert (English ST).
  • ...di soddisfare tutii i gusti da qulelli del
    gastronomo esigente a quelli dellesperto di
    pasticceria. (Italian TT)
  • ...to satisfy all tastes from those of the
    demanding gastronomist to those of the expert in
    pastry. (back-translation)
  • In Britain, cream tea is an afternoon meal
    consisting of tea to drink and scones wit jam and
    clotted cream to eat. It also includes
    sandwiches and cakes. Cream tea has no equivalent
    in other cultures. The Italian translator
    replaced it with pastry, which does not have
    the same meaning (for one thing, cream tea is a
    meal in Britain, whereas pastry is only a type
    of food). However, pastry is familiar to the
    Italian reader and therefore provides a good
    cultural substitute.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (c) Translation using a loan word or loan words
    plus explanation
  • This strategy is particularly common in dealing
    with culture-specific items, modern concepts and
    buzz words. Following the loan word with an
    explanation is very useful when the word in
    question is repeated several times in the text.
  • EXAMPLE
  • For maximum effect, cover the hair with a plastic
    cap or towel. (English ST)
  • For obtaining maximum effectiveness, the hair is
    covered by means of a cap, that is a plastic
    hat which covers the air, or by means of a towel.
    (back-translation from Arabic)

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • Translation using a loan word or loan words plus
    explanation (continued)
  • Sometimes, the term itself is not mentioned and
    the explanation replaces any reference to the
    original term. The explanation becomes the
    translation
  • EXAMPLE
  • astfel, necunoscuturile se îmblânzeau, zidirile
    neanimate si entitatile morale se poetizau
    metafizica se înfatisa într-o hora de zeite.
    (Romanian ST- from Creanga de aur by Mihail
    Sadoveanu)
  • Thus did the unknown become more tractable, while
    lifeless structures and moral entities grew
    poetical, and metaphysics was shown as a
    goddesses round dance. (English TT- The Golden
    Bough, by Mihail Sadoveanu, translated by Eugenia
    Farca, Bucharest Minerva Publishing House, 1981
    40-41)
  • The generally accepted translation of the
    Romanian word hora is in fact an explanation of
    the word. Unfortunately, in translating it
    through its explanation, the solar and the sacred
    implications of this Romanian popular dance are
    lost, as well as the connections with ancient
    Greek customs established by means of its
    etymology (ltNeo Greek horos).

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (d) Translation by paraphrase using a related
    word
  • This strategy is used when the concept expressed
    by the source item is lexicalized in the target
    language but in a different form, and when the
    frequency with which a certain form is used in
    the source text is significantly higher than
    would be natural in the target language.
  • EXAMPLE
  • The rich and creamy KOLESTRAL-SUPER is easy to
    apply and has a pleasant fragrance. (English ST)
  • Kolestral-super is rich and concentrated in its
    make-up which gives a product that resembles
    cream... (back-translation from Arabic)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Adjustments in the Member States GNI-based own
    resources payments ensure that budgeted revenue
    matches exactly budgeted expenditure. (English
    ST- from Communication from the Commission to the
    European Parliament, the Council and the Court of
    Auditors. Annual accounts of the European Union.
    Financial year 2009, at http//eur-lex.europa.eu)
  • Ajustarile pla?ilor statelor membre privind
    resursele proprii bazate pe VNB garanteaza
    coresponden?a între veniturile ?i cheltuielile
    înscrise în buget. (Romanian TT- from Comunicarea
    Comisiei catre Parlamentul European, Consiliu ?i
    Curtea de Conturi. Conturi anuale ale Uniunii
    Europene. Exerci?iul financiar 2009, at
    http//eur-lex.europa.eu)

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (e) Translation by paraphrase using unrelated
    words
  • If the concept expressed by the source item is
    not lexicalized at all in the target language,
    the paraphrase strategy can still be used in some
    contexts.
  • EXAMPLE
  • In the words of a Lonrho affidavit dated 2
    November 1988, the allegations...(English ST- A
    secret best seller, The Independent, November
    1988)
  • According to the text of a written communication
    supported by an oath presented by the Lonrho
    organization and dated 2 November 1988, the
    allegations... (back-translated from Arabic)
  • Romanian declaratie prestata sub juramânt
  • Advantage it reaches a high level of precision
    in specifying the propositional meaning.
  • Disadvantage
  • - paraphrase does not have the status of a
    lexical item and therefore cannot convey
    expressive, evoked or any other associated
    meanings
  • - awkward to use because it involves filling
    one-item slot with an explanation consisting of
    several items.

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (f) Translation by omission
  • If the meaning conveyed by a particular item or
    expression is not vital enough to the development
    of the text to justify distracting the reader
    with lengthy explanations, translators can and
    often do simply omit translating the word or
    expression in question.
  • EXAMPLE
  • The pandas mountain home is rich in plant life
    and gave us many of the trees, shrubs and herbs
    most prized in European gardens. (English ST-
    Chinas Panda Reserves)
  • The mountain settlements of the panda have rich
    varieties of plants. There are many kinds of
    trees, shrubs and herbal plants that are
    preciously regarded by European gardens.
    (back-translated from Chinese)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Of all the mediums that influence language, I
    think film is the one that has the most effect.
    (English ST- from Keep your English up to date-
    Make my day! by Prof. David Crystal)
  • Dintre toate artele care influenteaza limbajul,
    filmul are probabil cel mai mare impact.
    (Romanian ST- from Cele mai noi expresii din
    viata de zi cu zi at the following address
    http//www.bbc.co.uk/romanian/specials/1259_uptoda
    terom1/page2.shtml)

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Non-equivalence at word level and some common
strategies for dealing with it
  • Strategies used by professional translators
  • (g) Translation by illustration
  • This is a useful option if the word which lacks
    an equivalent in the target language refers to a
    physical entity which can be illustrated,
    particularly if there are restrictions on space
    and if the text has to remain short, concise and
    to the point.
  • eg. a figure that appeared on a Lipton Yellow
    Label tea packet prepared for the Arab market.
    There is no easy way of translated tagged, as in
    tagged teabags, into Arabic without going into
    lengthy explanations which would clutter the
    text. An illustration of a tagged teabag is
    therefore used instead of a paraphrase.

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Equivalence above word level
  • What happens when words start combining with
    other words to form stretches of language
  • Combination restrictions
  • The likelihood of certain words occurring with
    other words and the naturalness or typicality of
    the resulting combinations
  • The difficulties encountered by translators as a
    result of difference in the lexical patterning of
    the source and target languages.
  • Lexical patterning collocations and idioms
    (fixed expressions).
  • Focus on
  • - collocations
  • - idioms and fixed expressions

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Equivalence above word level
  • Collocational related pitfalls and problems in
    translation
  • (a) The engrossing effect of source text
    patterning
  • Translators sometimes get quite engrossed in the
    source text and may produce the oddest
    collocations in the target language for no
    justifiable reason.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Back at the dull mahogany tables of the
    Commission, I found myself again seated opposite
    the familiar, tall languid figure of Sir Godfray
    Le Quesne, rocking gently on his chair, with his
    hands clasped behind his head, and his eyes
    closed as he listened or slept through the
    hearings. Hed been looking into us for four
    years, and knew our business backwards. What am I
    doing here, I thought, as I gazed by the hour and
    by the month at the hole in the sole of his
    leather shoe, and wondered why Lonrhos bid was
    in the hands of his leather shoe, and wondered
    why Lonrhos bid was in the hands f a man who
    couldnt organise his own shoe repairs. (English
    ST- A hero from Zero)
  • The French translator of A Hero from Zero (a
    document produced by Lonrho Plc. about the
    acquisition of the House of Fraser by Mohamed
    Fayed) rendered shoe repairs as réparer ses
    chaussures (to repair his shoes), which is a
    literal translation from English. In French,
    réparer collocates with things like fridges,
    cars and machines in general, but it does not
    collocate with chaussures. The translators should
    have used ressemeler ses chaussures (resole his
    shoes) which is a far more natural collocation
    in French.

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Equivalence above word level
  • Collocational related pitfalls and problems in
    translation
  • (b) Misinterpreting the meaning of a
    source-language collocation
  • A translator can easily misinterpret a
    collocation in the source text due to
    interference from his/ her native language. This
    happens when a source-language collocation
    appears to be familiar because it corresponds in
    form to a common collocation in the target
    language.
  • EXAMPLE
  • All this represents only a part of all that
    Forbes Magazine reported on Fayed in the March
    issue mentioned before. In 1983, he had
    approached the industrialist Robert O. Anderson
    under the cover of a commission agent. The
    industrialist had been struck by his appearance
    as someone with modest means. Mr. Anderson was
    therefore astonished by his sudden acquisition of
    a considerable fortune. (English ST- A hero from
    Zero)
  • The industrialist saw in him a person whose
    appearance suggests modesty and simplicity.
    (back-translated from Arabic)
  • The collocation modest means suggest lack of
    affluence in English and not a moral quality. So,
    the translator misinterpreted the source
    collocation and communicated the wrong meaning in
    the TT.

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Equivalence above word level
  • Collocational related pitfalls and problems in
    translation
  • (c) The tension between accuracy and naturalness
  • A translator ideally aims at producing a
    collocation which is typical in the target
    language while, at the same time, preserving the
    meaning associated with the source collocation.
    This idea cannot always be achieved. Translation
    often involves a tension a difficult choice
    between what is typical and what is accurate.
  • The nearest acceptable collocation in the target
    language will often involved some change in
    meaning.
  • eg. the nearest acceptable collocation which can
    replace hard drink in Arabic is alcoholic
    drinks. But hard drinks refers only to spirits
    in English, for example whisky, gin, and brandy.
    It does not include other alcoholic drinks such
    as beer, lager, or sherry. The Arabic
    collocation, however, refers to any alcoholic
    beverage.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Tiny Rowland is a crisper writer than Peter
    Wright and has an even stranger story to tell.
    (English ST- The Independent)
  • Tiny Rowland has a sharper pen than Peter
    Wrights, and also the story which he is
    narrating is much stranger. (back-translated from
    Arabic)
  • Crisp writing is clear, concise writing. The
    collocation suggests approval, in Arabic, sharp
    pen is a common and typical collocation. But a
    writer described as having a shaper pen in
    Arabic is a fierce critic. The collocation
    suggests disapproval.

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Equivalence above word level
  • Collocational related pitfalls and problems in
    translation
  • (d) Culture-specific collocations
  • Some collocations reflect the cultural setting in
    which they occur. If the cultural setting of the
    source and target languages are significantly
    different, there will be instances when the
    source text will contain collocations which
    convey what to the target reader would be
    unfamiliar associations of ideas. They point to
    concepts that are not accessible to the target
    reader.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Papers relating to the lesser-known languages
    will be particularly welcome. (English ST)
  • We intend to discuss separately questions
    concerning the so-called small, i.e. less
    widespread and big, i.e. more widespread
    languages. (back-translated from Russian)
  • In English academic writing, it is common and
    acceptable to talk about lesser-known
    languages, as well as major languages and
    minor languages. Russian has no equivalent
    collocations. Furthermore, the political and
    social setting of Russian makes it potentially
    offensive to draw a distinction between
    better-known and lesser-known languages, or major
    and minor languages. Aware of such potentially
    offensive meaning, the translator uses the
    expression so-called in order to distance
    himself from the associations made.

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Equivalence above word level
  • Collocational related pitfalls and problems in
    translation
  • (e) Marked collocations in the source text
  • Unusual combinations of words are sometimes used
    in the source text in order to create new images.
    Ideally, the translation of a marked collocation
    will be similarly marked in the target language.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Canada has chosen to entrench its dual cultural
    heritage in its institutions and, as a result,
    official translation has taken firm root.
    (English ST- Language and Society- a bilingual
    journal published in Canada- no. 15, 1985, p.8)
  • Canada a choisi denchasser- le mot est hélas!
    à la mode- son double héritage culturel dans ses
    institutions et la traduction officielle y est,
    apr consequent, solidement enracinée. (French TT)
  • Canada has chosen to insert- the world is alas
    in fashion!- its double cultural heritage in its
    institutions and official translation is, as a
    consequence, solidly rooted there.
    (back-translation)
  • The reader of the source text is alerted to the
    writers wish to communicate an unusual image by
    the inverted commas around entrench.

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms difficulties
  • (a) An idiom or fixed expression may have no
    equivalent in the target language
  • eg. the sort of fixed formulae that are used in
    formal correspondence, such as Yours faithfully
    and Yours sincerely in English. These have no
    equivalents in Arabic formal correspondence.
    Instead, an expression such as wa tafadalu
    biqbuul faiq al-ihtiraam (literally and be
    kind enough to accept our highest respects) is
    often used, but it bears no direct relationship
    to Yours faithfully or Yours sincerely. The same
    mismatch occurs in relation to French and several
    other languages.
  • Idioms and fixed expressions which contain
    culture-specific items are not necessarily
    untranslatable. It is not the specific items an
    expression contains but rather the meaning it
    conveys and its association with culture-specific
    contexts which can make it untranslatable or
    difficult to translate.
  • eg. the English expression to carry coals to
    Newcastle, though culture-specific in the sense
    that it contains a reference to Newcastle coal
    and uses it as a measure of abundance, is
    nevertheless closely paralleled in German by
    Eulen nach Athen tragen (to carry owls to
    Athens). Both expressions convey the same
    meaning, namely to supply something to someone
    who already has plenty of it (Grauberg, 1989). In
    French, the same meaning can be rendered by the
    expression porter de leau à la rivière, to
    carry water to the river. Romanian a vinde
    castraveti gradinarului.

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms difficulties
  • (b) An idiom or fixed expression may have a
    similar counterpart in the target language, but
    its context of use may be different the two
    expressions may have different connotations, for
    instance, or they may not be pragmatically
    transferable.
  • eg. to sing a different tune is an English idiom
    which means to say or do something that signals a
    change in opinion because it contradicts what one
    has said or done before. In Chinese,
    chang-dui-tai-xi (to sing different tunes/ to
    sing a duet) also normally refers to
    contradictory point of view, but has quite a
    different usage. It has strong political
    connotations and can, in certain contexts, be
    interpreted as expressing complementary rather
    than contradictory points of view.

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms difficulties
  • (c) An idiom may be used in the source text in
    both its literal and idiomatic senses at the same
    time.
  • EXAMPLE
  • In creating Lord Peter Wimsey, Dorothy L. Sayers
    demonstrated all the advantages of the amateur
    private eye. As a wealthy dilettante he was able
    to pursue the clues without the boring necessity
    of earning a living. His title as a younger son
    of a duke pandered to reader snobbery and to the
    obsessive fascination of some readers with the
    lifestyle of the aristocracy, or with what they
    imagined that lifestyle to be. He had sufficient
    influence to be able to poke his nose into the
    private affairs of others where less aristocratic
    noses might have been speedily bloodied. (The
    British Translators Guild Intermediate
    Examinations for all languages,1986)
  • The play upon an idiom can be reproduced in
    languages such as French, German or Romanian
    which happen to have an identical idiom or at
    least an idiom which refers to interfering in
    other peoples affairs and which has the
    equivalent of nose in it.

33
Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms difficulties
  • (d)The very convention of using idioms in written
    discourse, the context in which they can be used,
    and their frequency of use may be different in
    the source and target languages.
  • English uses idioms in many types of texts,
    though not in all. Their use in quality- press
    news reports is limited, but is it quite common
    to see idioms in English advertisements,
    promotional material and in the tabloid press.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Its got style. And a performance engine that
    says its a lot more than just a pretty face.
    (Today s Cars, Austin Rover, 1989)
  • Languages such as Arabic and Chinese avoid using
    idioms in written discourse.

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms strategies
  • (a) Using an idiom of similar meaning and form
  • It involves using an idiom in the target language
    which conveys roughly the same meaning as that of
    the source-language idiom and, in addition
    consists of equivalent lexical items.
  • EXAMPLE
  • The sultans magnificent income was distributed
    impulsively at his command. The rain fell on the
    just and on the unjust. (English ST- A Hero from
    Zero, p. 21)
  • Le revenue fabuleux du Sultan était distribute
    sur un simle ordre de sa part. La pluie tombait
    aussi bien sur les justes ques sur les injustes.
    (French TT)
  • The fantastic income of the Sultan was
    distributed on a simple order on his part. The
    rain was falling on the just as well as on the
    unjust. (back-translation)

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms strategies
  • Using an idiom of similar meaning and form
    (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Here dreaming, though wide-awake, of the
    exquisite tortures to which they were to put him
    at break of day, those confiding savages were
    found by the treacherous Hook. (English ST- from
    The Adventures of Peter Pan by Barrie, James
    Matthew, at http//barrie.thefreelibrary.com/The-A
    dventures-of-Peter-Pan/12-1breakofday)
  • În timp ce visau, ce-i drept, cu ochii deschisi,
    la groznicele torturi la care aveau sa-l supuna
    când se va crapa de ziua, acesti salbatici
    creduli fura surprinsi de Gheara cel
    perfid.(Romanian TT- from Peter Pan, by Barrie,
    J.M., translated by Sorea, Daniela. Bucharest
    Rao Publishing House, 2007127)

36
Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms strategies
  • (b) Using an idiom of similar meaning but
    dissimilar form
  • eg. the English expression One good turn deserves
    another and the French expression À beau jeu,
    beau retour (a handsome action deserves a
    handsome return) use different lexical items to
    express more or less the same ideas. The Romanian
    equivalent Dupa fapta si rasplata.

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms strategies
  • (c) Translation by paraphrase
  • EXAMPLE
  • The suspension system has been fully uprated to
    take rough terrain in its stride. (English ST-
    Austin Montego- car brochure)
  • The capacity of the suspension system has been
    raised so as to overcome the roughness of the
    terrain. (back-translated from Arabic)
  • They were a good deal taken aback, and after a
    little consultation one and all tumbled down the
    fore companion, thinking no doubt to take us on
    the rear. But when they saw Redruth waiting for
    them in the sparred galley, they went about ship
    at once, and a head popped out again on deck.
    (English ST- Treasure Island, by Stevenson, R.L.,
    at http//stevenson.thefreelibrary.com/Treasure-Is
    land/4-1takenaback)
  • Banditii au ramas buimaciti. Apoi, dupa ce s-au
    mai sfatuit în soapta, s-au napustit cu totii la
    chepeng, cu gând sa ne atace pe la spate, dar,
    întâlnindu-l în trecatoarea îngusta pe Redruth cu
    muschetele, s-au repezit iar îndarat. Unul din ei
    si-a itit capul din chepeng, sa vada ce mai e pe
    punte. (Romanian TT- Insula comorilor, by
    Stevenson, R.L., translated by Cosmescu,
    Alexandru. Chisinau Litera Publishing House,
    1997 119)

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Equivalence above word level
  • The translation of idioms strategies
  • (d) Translation by omission
  • EXAMPLE
  • It was bitter, but funny, to see that Professor
    Smith had doubled his own salary before
    recommending the offer from Fayed, and added a
    pre-dated bonus for good measure. (English ST- A
    Hero from Zero, p. VI )
  • It was regrettable, even funny, that Professor
    Smith had been able to double his salary twice
    before offering his recommendation to accept
    Fayeds offer, and that he added to this a bonus,
    the date of which had been previously decided on.
    (back-translated from Arabic)
  • EXAMPLE
  • The application form does indeed speak of
    publication of information on the beneficiaries
    of the EAGF and the EAFRD and the amounts
    received per beneficiary and refers to Article
    44a of Council Regulation No 1290/2005 (and, for
    good measure, to Article 11 of Commission
    Regulation No 796/2005). (English ST- from
    Opinion of the Advocate-General, at
    http//eur-lex.europa.eu)
  • În formularul de cerere se men?ioneaza
    într-adevar publicarea informa?iilor referitoare
    la beneficiarii FEGA ?i FEADR ?i la sumele
    primite de fiecare beneficiar ?i se face
    trimitere la articolul 44a din Regulamentul
    nr. 1290/2005 al Consiliului (precum ?i la
    articolul 11 din Regulamentul nr. 796/2005 al
    Comisiei). (Romanian TT- from Opinia avocatului
    general, at http//eur-lex.europa.eu)

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Grammatical equivalence
  • 1. Number
  • English recognizes a distinction between singular
    and plural. This distinction has to be expressed
    morphologically, by adding a suffix to a noun or
    by changing its form in some other way to
    indicate whether it refers to one or more than
    one student/ students, fox/ foxes, man/men, etc.
    Some languages, such as Japanese, Chinese, and
    Vietnamese, prefer to express the same notion
    lexically or more often, not at all.
  • eg. my book and my books are both wo-de-shu in
    Chinese.
  • Other languages have the grammatical category of
    number, similar, but not identical to that of
    English. Arabic, Eskimo and some Slavonic
    language distinguish between one, two and more
    than two.
  • Translators choices
  • (a) to omit the relevant information on number
  • Chinas Panda Reserves. (English ST)
  • Chinas Panda Protection-zoneltsgt.
    (back-translated from Chinese)
  • (b) to encode this information lexically
  • The heads of the ministries created in 189 were
    not directly responsible for advising and
    assisting (hohitsu) the emperor, though they
    were to become so in 1889. (English ST- Palace
    and Politics in Prewar Japan)
  • The headltsgt of various ministryltiesgt created in
    Meiji 2nd are not directly responsible for
    hohitsu the emperor. (back-translated from
    Japanese)

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Grammatical equivalence
  • 2. Gender
  • English does not have a grammatical category of
    gender as such English nouns are not regularly
    inflected to distinguish between feminine and
    masculine.
  • English has the category of person which
    distinguishes in the third-person singular
    between masculine, feminine and inanimate
    (he/she/it). This distinction does not apply to
    the third-person plural (they). In some
    languages, such as Arabic, gender distinctions
    apply to the second as well as third person
    pronouns. In addition to gender distinctions in
    the third-person singular and plural, Arabic has
    different forms for you depending on whether
    the person or persons addressed is/are male or
    female.
  • EXAMPLE the problematic items in the ST the
    pronominal function of gender.
  • Shampoo the hair with a mild WELLA-SHAMPOO and
    lightly towel dry.
  • Apply KOLESTRAL-SUPER directly onto the hair and
    massage gently.
  • For maximum effect, cover the hair with a plastic
    cap or towel.
  • KOLESTRAL-SUPER can be left on the hair for 10-20
    minutes.
  • After the developing time rinse off thoroughly
    before styling- no shampooing required.
  • Style the hair as usual. (English ST-
    Instructions for use)
  • The hair is washed with Wella shampoo, provided
    that it is a mild shampoo. Then the hair is dried
    by means of a towel, a simple drying so that the
    hair is left damp.
  • Kolestral-Super is put directly on the hair and
    massaged with softness and gentleness.
  • For obtaining maximum effectiveness, the hair is
    covered by means of a cap, that is a plastic hat
    which covers the hair, or by means of a towel.
  • Kolestral-Super is left for a period of 10-20
    minutes.
  • After the end of the reaction period, the hair
    should be rinsed well and in depth before
    starting on the desired hair-do. No need for
    shampoo in this final stage.
  • The hair is styled and combed as usual and in the
    desired fashion and the result is ideal and
    marvellous. (back-translated from Arabic)
  • Passive voice instead of the imperative in order
    to avoid specifying the subject of the verb
    altogether.

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Grammatical equivalence
  • Gender (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Do not touch the power cord with wet hands as it
    may cause electric shocks.
  • Place the unit in a well ventilated area and
    no-heat environment. (English ST- from Embedded
    Nagravision Digital Cable Receiver HSC-1170NA.
    User Manual. Hyundai Digital Technology, pp. 2)
  • Nu atingeti cablul cu mâinile ude, caci ar putea
    produce un soc electric.
  • Puneti aparatul într-un loc aerisit si racoros.
    (Romanian TT- from Receptor digital de cablu
    HSC-1170NA. Manual de utilizare. Hyundai Digital
    Technology, pp. 2)
  • In Romanian, the problematic issue of the
    pronominal function of gender is avoided by using
    a verbal form specific to the plural form of the
    second person, personal pronoun (no gender
    distinctions for masculine or feminine).

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Grammatical equivalence
  • 3. Person
  • The category of person relates to the notion of
    participant roles.
  • Bahasa Indonesia has a nine-term pronoun system
    where English has only seven. The gender
    dimension is absent from Bathasa Indonesia, but
    two other dimensions are of relevance
  • i. the inclusive/ exclusive dimension English we
    has two translations in Bahasa Indonesia,
    involving a choice between kami and kita,
    depending on whether the addressee is included or
    excluded
  • ii. the familiar/ non-familiar dimension which
    necessitates a choice between for instance aku
    and saja for English I, depending on the
    relationship between speaker and bearer.
  • A large number of modern European languages, not
    including English, have a formality/ politeness
    dimension in their person system. French vous as
    opposed to tu Italian lei (third-person
    singular) as opposed to tu Spanish usted as
    opposed tu German Sie as opposed to du Greek
    esi as opposed to esis and Russian vy as opposed
    to ty.
  • In translation, decision have to be made along
    such dimensions as
  • gender
  • degree of intimacy between participants
  • whether reference includes or excludes the
    addressee.

43
Grammatical equivalence
  • Person (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • The source text is from Agatha Christies Crooked
    House (1949). The characters in the following
    dialogue are a young man, Charles, and a young
    lady, Sophia. They have worked together and have
    been friends for some time. Charles has just
    asked Sophia to marry him. (p. 9)
  • Darling- dont you understand? Ive tried not to
    say I love you-
  • She stopped me.
  • I understand, Charles. And I like your funny way
    of doing things...
  • Mais vous ne comprenez donc pas? Vous ne voyez
    donc pas que je fais tout ce que je peux pour ne
    pas vous dire que je vous aime et...
  • Elle minterrompit.
  • Jai parafaitement compris, Charles, et votre
    façon comique de presenter les choses mest très
    sympathique...(French TT)
  • The use of vous in the French translation
    indicates a level of formality and politeness
    which is not overtly conveyed in the English
    original.
  • The translator has to make conscious decisions
    about the nature of the relationships among
    different characters in the story and about the
    social standing of these characters as reflected
    in their adoption of certain conventions.

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Grammatical equivalence
  • Person (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Darling- dont you understand? Ive tried not to
    say I love you-
  • She stopped me.
  • I understand, Charles. And I like your funny way
    of doing things... (English ST)
  • - Iubito, nu întelegi? Am încercat sa nu spun te
    iubesc
  • Ea m-a oprit.
  • - Ba înteleg, Charles. Si îmi place felul tau
    nostim de a face lucrurile.
  • (Romanian TT- from Crima din casuta strâmba,
    translated by Sprinteroiu, Simina and Gradinaru,
    Lidia, Bucharest Multi Press Publishing House,
    19977)
  • The Romanian translators chose to render the
    familiarity between the two fiancées and opted
    for the second person singular pronoun instead of
    a more formal address.

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Grammatical equivalence
  • 4. Tense and aspect
  • In some languages, the tense and aspect system
    are highly developed. Wishram, an American Indian
    language, makes no fewer than four distinctions
    in reference to past events alone, each
    distinction expressing a certain degree of
    remoteness from the moment of speaking. Some
    languages, such as Chinese, Malay, and Yurok,
    have no formal category of tense or aspect. The
    form of the verb in these languages does not
    change to express temporal or aspectual
    distinctions.
  • Strategies
  • - the use of adverbials to indicate time
    reference where necessary and feasible in a
    Chinese translation
  • This attractive black and white mammal has
    widespread human appeal and has become a symbol
    for conservation efforts both within China and
    internationally as the symbol of The World Wide
    Fund for Nature (WWF). (English ST)
  • This attractive black-white mammal widely liked
    by people and already become a symbol of
    conservation efforts...
  • The adverbial yi-jing already is added to give
    the effect of the present perfect in English.
  • - the omission of time reference altogether
    where it can be inferred from the context or
    where the information is not felt to be
    important.
  • Species like this mountain rhododendron were
    collected by 19th century botanists and then
    transported back to Europe for horticultural
    collections. (English ST)
  • Species like this mountain rhododendron
    collectltedgt by 19th century botanists and then
    transportltedgt back to Europe for horticultural
    collections. (back-translated from Chinese)
  • The connotations of pastness in the above extract
    can be inferred from the context, because of the
    reference to 19th century botanists. There is
    therefore no need to signal the past overtly in
    the Chinese text.

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Grammatical equivalence
  • 5. Voice
  • Scientific and technical writing in English
    relies heavily on passive structures (in order to
    give the impression of objectivity and to
    distance the writer from the statements made in
    the text).
  • EXAMPLE
  • Papers are invited on all aspects of
    lexicography, theoretical and practical,
    diachronic and synchronic.
  • Individual presentations should be timed to last
    20 minutes, with a discussion period to follow.
  • Abstracts should be sent to the Lecture Programme
    Organizer. (English ST- Conference Circular)
  • The overall theme of the congress will include
    all the most important aspects of lexicography.
  • The envisaged length of individual papers is 20
    minutes, not counting supplementary speeches and
    discussions.
  • We ask for a short abstract of papers to be sent
    to the academic organizer of the congress.
    (back-translated from Russian)

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Grammatical equivalence
  • Voice (continued)
  • EXAMPLE
  • The two major thematic areas ... are oriented
    upon different contemporary socio-humanist
    research fields, thus gathering many academic
    teachers interested in the topics above. 
  • Researchers from different fields ...are
    invited to debate on feminist history, feminist
    discourse, feminine writing, feminine artistic
    and literary representations, mythical /
    ideological feminine values within political /
    religious contexts, all of these oriented upon
    the francophone culture. (English ST- from First
    Call for Papers for The International Colloquium
    Feminine Representations within the Francophone
    Cultural Space, at http//www.lit.ugal.ro/2010-CIL
    -FEMININE/First_call.htm)
  • Cele doua axe tematice majore ... se raporteaza
    la domenii de mare interes în cercetarea
    socio-umana contemporana, continuând si
    completând o serie de demersuri semnificative ale
    universitarilor din întreaga lume.
  • Cercetatori din domenii diferite ... sunt
    invitati la o serie de dezbateri vizând istoria
    si memoria feminista, discursul feminist,
    scriitura feminina, reprezentarile
    literar-artistice ale feminitatii, proiectiile
    mitice / ideologice ale acesteia la nivelul
    imaginarului politic sau religios, raportabile la
    spatiul cultural francofon si la valorile
    francofoniei. (Romanian TT- from Prima Circulara
    pentru Colocviul international Reprezentari ale
    feminitatii în spatiul francofon, at
    http//www.lit.ugal.ro/2010-CIL-FEMININE/Apel_cola
    borare.htm)
  • In Romanian, passive structures are rendered by
    means of both passive and reflexive structures.

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TEXTUAL EQUIVALENCE
  • Textual equivalence thematic and information
    structures
  • Thematic structure theme and rheme
  • The first segment of the text is called theme
    what the clause is about.
  • The second segment of a clause is called the
    rheme what the speaker says about the theme.
    (Hallidays model)
  • EXAMPLE
  • Ptolemys model provided a reasonably accurate
    system for predicting the positions of heavenly
    bodies in the sky.
  • Ptolemys model the theme
  • provided a reasonably accurate system for
    predicting the positions of heavenly bodies in
    the sky the rheme.

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TEXTUAL EQUIVALENCE
  • Thematic choice involves selecting a clause
    element as theme.
  • (a) Fronted theme
  • - Fronting of time or place adjunct
  • In China the book received a great deal of
    publicity.
  • On 4th March 1985, the Fayed brothers made an
    offer of four pounds a share for House of Fraser.
  • - Fronting of object or complement
  • Object A great deal of publicity the book has
    received in China.
  • Complement Well publicized the book was.
  • - Fronting of predicator
  • They promised to publicize the book in China, and
    publicize it they did.

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TEXTUAL EQUIVALENCE
  • (b) Predicated theme
  • - it involves an it-structure (also called a
    cleft structure)
  • eg. It was the book that received a great deal of
    publicity in China.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Era un om interesant, în orice caz, si lui i se
    datoreaza povestea care urmeaza. E o datorie de
    pietate sa-l pomenesc aici. (Romanian ST- from
    Creanga de aur by Mihail Sadoveanu)
  • He was at all events an interesting chap. It is
    to him that we owe the following story so that it
    is only a pious duty to mention him here
  • (English TT- The Golden Bough, by Mihail
    Sadoveanu, translated by Eugenia Farca,
    Bucharest Minerva Publishing House, 1981 32-33
    34-35)
  • (c) Identifying theme
  • -similar to predicated themes instead of using
    it (a cleft structure), an identifying theme
    places an element in theme position by turning it
    into a nominalization using a wh-structure (a
    pseudo-sleft structure)
  • eg. What the book received in China was a great
    deal of publicity.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Esentialul e sa întelegi ca ordinea de timp a
    batrânului meu din acest munte stapâneste asupra
    aeroplanului dumnealor si asupra aparatului
    dumnevoastra de radio. (Romanian ST- from Creanga
    de aur by Mihail Sadoveanu)
  • What is essential for you to understand is that
    the regulation of time of my aged man in this
    mountain prevails over yonder gentlemens
    airplanes as well as over your wireless sets.
    (English TT- The Golden Bough, by Mihail
    Sadoveanu, translated by Eugenia Farca,
    Bucharest Minerva Publishing House, 1981 44-45)

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TEXTUAL EQUIVALENCE
  • The tension between word order and communicative
    function a problem in translation?
  • -topic-prominent vs. subject-prominent languages
    in a topic-prominent language linear arrangement
    follows the scale of CD far more closely than it
    does in a subject-prominent language.
  • -word order vs. communicative function languages
    with different priorities.
  • Suggested strategies for minimizing linear
    dislocation
  • a. voice change
  • - it involves changing the syntactic form of a
    verb to achieve a different sequence of elements
    (passive- active and vice versa).
  • b. change of the verb
  • - changing the verb altogether and replacing it
    with one that has a similar meaning but can be
    used in a different syntactic configuration.
  • eg. I like it It pleases me. (the latter is very
    unnatural)
  • c. nominalization
  • some languages allow the order verb subject. If
    the translator has to adhere to an obligatory
    order of subject verb in the target language,
    nominalization could probably provide a good
    strategy in many contexts.
  • eg. describe- description.
  • d. extraposition
  • -it involves changing the position of the entire
    clause in the sentence by, for instance,
    embedding a simple clause in a complex sentence
  • eg. cleft and pseudo-cleft structures.

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TEXTUAL EQUIVALENCE
  • Textual equivalence cohesion
  • Cohesion the network of lexical, grammatical,
    and other relations which provide links between
    various parts of a text.
  • Main cohesive devices in English reference,
    substitution, ellipsis, conjunction and lexical
    cohesion.
  • a. Reference
  • reference the relationship of identity which
    holds between two linguistic expressions.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Surrounded by the toys and the gadgets of his
    calling- tape recorders, mini television sets,
    world-band radios- he is the quintessential
    Japanese combination that has conquered the
    world a tinkerer turned businessman.
  • As the eldest son of a wealthy sake and soy-sauce
    producer in conservative Nagoya, he was expected
    to take over the family business- and perhaps
    become the 15th generation of Morita Mayors in
    the local community. Instead, he spent his time
    taking apart clocks and listening to Western
    classical music and preferred the study of
    physics to business. During World War Two, he
    went into naval research as a lieutenant, working
    on a thermal-guided missile and other projects,
    and it was there that he met his future partner,
    Ibuka. After the war, the two set up a business
    after a false start in the home-appliance market-
    manufacturing rice cookers. Total production
    100. Total sales 0. (English ST- references to
    Akio Morita, Chairman of the Sony Corporation)
  • Product of a culture that values subtlety and
    indirect manners, Morita, with his frank way, is
    an ideal bridge between Japan and the West.
  • The eldest son of a prosperous producer of soya
    oil and saki, in Nagoya, the parents of Morita
    expected that he should take over the control of
    the family business. Instead of this, Morita
    spent the time taking clocks apart, listening to
    Western classical music and preferring to study
    physics to putting himself into business. During
    the Second World War lthegt dedicated himself to
    naval research, as a civilian and it was in this
    period that lthegt made a partnership in a factory
    of rice cooking pots. Total production 100 pots.
    Total sales 0. (back-translated from Portuguese)
  • English prefers to pick up the reference in a new
    paragraph by means of a pronoun, while Portuguese
    prefers lexical repetition.

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  • b. Substitution and ellipsis
  • -substitution the replacement of an item (or
    items) by another item (items)
  • eg. You think Joan already knows?
  • I think everybody does. (does replaces knows).
  • -ellipsis the omission of an item.
  • eg. Joan brought some carnations, and Catherine
    some sweet peas. (ellipted item brought in the
    second cause).
  • c. Conjunction
  • Conjunction the use of formal markers to relate
    sentences, clauses and paragraphs to each other.
  • EXAMPLE
  • Today people are aware that modern ceramic
    materials offer unrivalled properties for many of
    our most demanding industrial applications. So is
    this brochure necessary isnt the ceramic market
    already over-bombarded with technical literature
    why should Matroc add more?
  • Because someone mumbles, our competitors do it.
    But why should we imitate our competitors when
    Matroc probably supplies a greater range of
    ceramic materials for more applications than any
    other manufacturer.
  • And yet there are some customers who in their
    search for a suitable material prefer to study
    complex tables of technical data. It is for such
    customers that we have listed the properties of
    Matrocs more widely used materials. Frankly
    however without cost guides which depend so much
    on shape such an exercise is of limited values.
    (English ST)
  • Today experts are fully agreed that modern
    ceramic materials offer unsurpassed qualities for
    many of the most demanding industrial
    applications. So we asked ourselves whether this
    catalogue would still find a corresponding
    resonance, given the flood of technical
    literature which is currently circulating in the
    ceramics market. Should Matroc also add its
    contribution to this?
  • On the one hand, some would say that is quite
    usual for business but on the other hand will we
    reach our customers just by eagerly imitating
    others? Finally, Matroc offers a greater range of
    ceramics for more applications than most other
    firms.
  • Now, there are customers who in their search for
    suitable materials prefer to study copious
    technical data sheets. For such customers we have
    listed the properties of the most popular Matroc
    materials. (back-translated from German)

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  • Conjunction (continued)
  • Metodele mele, însa, m-au îndemnat foarte de
    timpuriu, de pe când eram tânar ca dumnevoastra,
    sa caut argumentul acestor paleologii, datini si
    eresuri ale populatiilor din Carpati. Am ajuns la
    niste concluzii firesti, carora unora li s-ar
    parea totusi surprinzatoare. Am ajuns sa
    pretuiesc si sa iubesc aceste alcatuiri vii ale
    religiei vechi a pamântului acestuia, gasind în
    ele gândirea stramosilor mei si însusi sufletul
    lor. (Romanian ST- from Creanga de aur by Mihail
    Sadoveanu)
  • But my own methods induced me- when I was not
    older than yourselves- to seek to interpret the
    palaeology, the customs and superstitions of the
    Carpathian populations, and I reached conclusions
    which are only natural, but which, nevertheless,
    some people might find surprising. And I have
    come to prize and to love the living
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