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Title: HOW TO WRITE A WORLD CLASS MEDICAL PAPER


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HOW TO WRITE A WORLD CLASS MEDICAL PAPER
  • TIPS, TRAPS AND RAVESTIES

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?????? ????Elsevier ???? ????2009
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HOW TO WRITE A WORLD CLASS MEDICAL PAPER
TIPS, TRAPS AND TRAVESTIES
??,Publishing Specialist
ST, Elsevier China
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Outline
  • What to do before you start writing a paper?
  • How to write a quality paper?
  • Structure
  • Language
  • Technical details
  • Cover letter
  • What to do when you finish a paper?
  • Ethical issues

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What to do before you start writing a paper?
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STEP I Looking back on your research
  1. Have you done something new and interesting?
  2. Have you checked the latest results in the field?
  3. Have the findings been verified by appropriate
    analysis and their significance verified?
  4. Are the methods/measurements valid and reliable?
  5. Can you describe the scope and limitations of the
    methods?
  6. Do your findings tell a nice story or is the
    story incomplete?
  7. Is the work directly related to a current hot
    topic?
  8. Have you provided solutions to any difficult
    problems?

If all answers are yes, then start preparing
your manuscript.
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STEP II Thinking over your goals
  1. What type of manuscript?
  2. Who is your audience?
  3. Which journal?

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What type of manuscript?
  1. Full-Length Methodology Research (Original
    articles)
  2. Letters/Rapid Communications/Short Communications
  3. Case Studies/Case report
  4. Review Papers
  • Self-evaluate your work Is it sufficient for
    a full article? Or are your results so thrilling
    that they need to be revealed as soon as
    possible?
  • Ask your supervisor and colleagues for advice
    on manuscript type. Sometimes outsiders may see
    things more clearly than you.

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Who is the audience?
  • Do you want to reach specialists,
    multidisciplinary researchers, or a general
    audience?
  • You will need to adjust information and
    writing style accordingly.
  • Journals, even in similar subjects, reach readers
    with different backgrounds
  • Each journal has its own style read other
    articles to get an idea of what is accepted
  • Is the readership worldwide or local?

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Which journal?
  • Consider
  • Aims and scope (check journal websites and recent
    articles)
  • Types of articles
  • Readership
  • Current hot topics (go through recent abstracts)
  • Asking colleagues for advice

Sometimes it is necessary to lower ones sights
or return to the lab/clinic to obtain more data
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WARNING
DO NOT gamble by scattering your manuscript to
many journals Only submit once! International
ethics standards prohibit multiple simultaneous
submissions, and editors DO find out!
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Format
  • Consult and apply the list of guidelines in the
  • GUIDE FOR AUTHORS
  • Ensure that you use the correct
  • Layout
  • Section lengths (stick to word limits)
  • Nomenclature, abbreviations and spellings
    (British vs. American)
  • Reference format
  • Number/type of figures and tables
  • Statistics

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REMEMBER THAT
Consulting the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS will save your
time and the editors
All editors hate wasting time on poorly prepared
manuscripts It is a sign of DISRESPECT
Visit www.elsevier.com to find a specific
journal for GUIDE FOR AUTHORS
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An Example of Guide for Authors
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  • How to write
  • a quality paper?

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Two Questions for you
  • What is IMRAD?
  • Which part should you start with?

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Article structure
Need to be accurate and informative for effective
indexing and searching
  • Title
  • Authors
  • Abstract
  • Keywords
  • Main text (IMRAD)
  • Introduction
  • Methods
  • Results
  • and
  • Discussion/Conclusions
  • Acknowledgements
  • References
  • Supplementary materials

Each has a distinct function
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Write in a different order
  • Methods
  • Results
  • Discussion and Conclusion
  • Introduction
  • Abstract
  • Title

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METHODS
The METHODS section should be the bulk of the
paper and it must provide sufficient information
so that a knowledgeable reader can reproduce the
experiment.
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METHODS
The METHODS section can be generally divided into
several specific parts
  1. Define the population and the methods of sampling
  2. Describe the instrumentation
  3. Describe the procedures and if relevant, the time
    frame
  4. Describe the analysis plan
  5. Describe any approaches to ensure validity and
    reliability
  6. State any assumptions
  7. Describe the scope and limitations of the
    methodology

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Tips for METHODS
  1. Be detailed, but not any previously published
    procedures. Those can be noted or described in
    the References or Supporting Materials sections.
  2. Identify the equipment and materials used. A
    source of the materials or equipment can be used
    if there is the chance for variability of quality
    of these items.


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RESULTS
  • DONT
  • Duplicate data among tables, figures and text
  • Use graphics to illustrate data that can easily
    be summarized with text
  • DO
  • Use figures and tables to summarize data
  • Show the results of statistical analysis
  • Confirm that the method is reliable
  • Justify the choice of methods
  • Define the limitations of the methods

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Graphics
Readers often look at the graphics first and
many times go no further. Therefore, the reviewer
should be particularly sensitive to inclusion of
clear and informative graphics. Henry
Rapoport, Associate Editor, Journal of Organic
Chemistry
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Graphics
Figures and tables are the most effective way to
present results. BUT
  • Captions should be able to stand alone, such
    that the figures and tables are understandable
    without the need to read the entire manuscript
  • Captions should not contain extensive
    experimental details that can be found in the
    METHODS section
  • The data represented should be easy to
    interpret
  • Colour should only be used when necessary

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Graphics
The figure and table show the same information,
but the table is more direct and clear
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Graphics
  • Legend is poorly defined
  • Graph contains too much data
  • No trend lines

Poor
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Graphics
Better
Legend is well defined but there is still too
much data and no trendlines
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Graphics
Best
  • Legend is clear
  • Data is better organized
  • Trend lines are present

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Statistics
  • Indicate the statistical tests used with all
    relevant parameters
  • mean SD
  • Give numerator and denominators with
    percentages
  • 40 (100/250)
  • Use Means and Standard Deviations to report
    normally distributed data

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Statistics
  • Use medians and interpercentile ranges to
    report skewed data
  • Report P values
  • p0.0035 rather than plt0.05
  • The word significant should only be used to
    describe statistically significant differences

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DISCUSSION
This is the most important section of the
article. It is where you get the chance to SELL
your data! A huge number of manuscripts are
rejected because the DISCUSSION is weak. For some
methodology journals, the discussion and
conclusions are lumped into one section.
  • Describe
  • What your results mean?
  • Were the methods successful?
  • How did the findings relate to those of other
    studies?
  • Were there limitations of the study?

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Tips for DISCUSSION
  • Make the Discussion correspond to the Results.
    BUT DO NOT reiterate the results.
  • DO NOT making grand statements that are not
    supported by the methods or the results
  • Example This novel treatment will
    massively reduce the prevalence of malaria in the
    third world
  • DO NOT introducing of new terms not mentioned
    previously in your paper
  • AVOID unspecific expressions such as higher
    temperature or at a lower rate USE
    quantitative descriptions
  • Speculations on possible interpretations are
    allowed. BUT these should be rooted in fact,
    rather than imagination.
  • Compare the published results with your own. BUT
    DO NOT ignore work in disagreement with yours
    confront it and convince the reader that you are
    correct or better.

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CONCLUSIONS
  • Describe
  • How your work advances the field?
  • Indicate applications of your work.
  • Suggest future experiments that build on your
    work and point out experiments already underway
    as well.

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Tips for CONCLUSIONS
  • Better to avoid
  • Downplaying negative results
  • Making statements based on personal opinion
    without scientific support
  • Repeating other sections
  • Over-emphasizing the impact of your study
  • Example
  • Although the statistical analysis did not
    provide a reasonable level of significance, we
    believe that the methodology is a valid approach
    towards the design of new wastewater treatment
    facilities. In fact, we argue that these methods
    could be adopted to the design of any treatment
    system worldwide.

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INTRODUCTION
The Introduction is used to provide context
for your manuscript and convince readers why your
work would be useful in advancing that particular
field of study.
  • Clearly address the following
  • What is the problem you are ultimately trying
    to solve?
  • Are there any solutions?
  • What is the best solution?
  • What is that solutions limitations?
  • What is your work trying to achieve?
  • Outline what was done and achieved in the final
    paragraph

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Tips for INTRODUCTION
  1. Be brief, usually one to two paragraphs is
    appropriate. (Consult the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS for
    word limit.) Long introductions put readers off.
    Introductions of Letters are even shorter. Try
    NOT TO make this section into a history lesson.
  2. Cite a couple of original and important works,
    including recent review articles). However,
    editors DO NOT LIKE too many citations to
    references irrelevant to the work, or
    inappropriate judgments on your own achievements.
  3. DO NOT ignore contradictory studies or work by
    competitors
  4. DO NOT mix introduction with results, discussion,
    and conclusion or your data. Always keep them
    separate to ensure that the manuscript flows
    logically from one section to the next.
  5. Expressions such as novel, first time, first
    ever, paradigm-changing.
  6. Define any non-standard abbreviations and jargon
  7. Provide a perspective that is consistent with the
    journal that you are submitting to.

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ABSTRACT
Indicative (descriptive) abstracts outline the
topics covered in a piece of writing so the
reader can decide whether or not to read on.
Often used in review articles and conference
reports Informative abstracts summarize the
article based on the paper structure (problem,
methods, case studies, conclusions), but without
section headings Structured abstracts follow
headings required by the journal. Often used in
Medical journals Check carefully which type
fits the journal of your choice.
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ABSTRACT
The quality of an abstract will strongly
influence the editors decision
  • A good abstract
  • Is precise and honest
  • Can stand alone
  • Is brief and specific
  • Uses no technical jargon
  • Minimizes the use of abbreviations
  • Cites no references

Use the abstract to sell your article
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TITLE
A good title should contain the fewest possible
words that adequately describe the contents of a
paper
  • DONT
  • Use unnecessary jargon
  • Use uncommon abbreviations
  • Use ambiguous terms
  • Use unnecessary detail
  • Focus on part of the content only
  • DO
  • Convey main findings of research
  • Be specific
  • Be concise
  • Be complete
  • Attract readers

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TITLE
Preliminary observations on the effect of
Etanercept in Patients with Ankylosing Spondylitis
Effect of Etanercept on Patients with Ankylosing
Spondylitis
Tips Long title distracts readers. Remove all
redundancies such as observations on, the
nature of, etc.
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TITLE
Action of antibiotics on bacteria
Inhibition of growth of mycobacterium
tuberculosis by streptomycin
Tips Titles should be specific. Think to
yourself How will I search for this piece of
information? when you design the title.
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KEYWORDS
Keywords are important for indexing they enable
your manuscript to be more easily identified and
cited.
Check the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS for journal
requirements
  • Tips
  • Keywords should be specific
  • Avoid uncommon abbreviations and general terms
    except established abbreviations (e.g. DNA)
  • Medical Subject Headings (MeSH, National
    Library of Medicine) http//www.nlm.nih.gov/mesh/
    MBrowser.html

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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Acknowledge anyone who has helped you with the
study, including
  • Advisors
  • Financial supporters
  • Proofreaders
  • Typists
  • Suppliers who may have given materials
  • Tips
  • State why people have been acknowledged and
    ask their permission
  • Acknowledge sources of funding, including any
    grant or reference numbers

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REFERENCES
Check the style and format as required it is
not the editors job to do so for you
  • Harvard System (alphabetical by author/date)
  • Berridge, MJ 1998, Neuronal calcium signaling,
    Neuron vol. 21 pp. 13-26
  • APA (American Psychological Association) System
    (alphabetical)
  • Berridge, M.J. (1998). Neuronal calcium
    signaling. Neuron 21, 13-26
  • Vancouver System (numbered in order or citation)
  • Berridge MJ. Neuronal calcium signaling. Neuron.
    19982113-26

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Tips for REFERENCES
  • Check the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS to ensure the
    proper format. Make the editors work easier and
    they will appreciate the effort.
  • Avoid
  • Too many references
  • Excessive self-citations
  • Excessive citations of publications from the same
    region
  • Personal communications, unpublished observations
    and submitted manuscripts not yet accepted
  • Citing articles published only in the local
    language
  • Check
  • Spelling of author names
  • Punctuation
  • Number of authors to include before using et
    al.
  • Reference style

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SUPPLEMENTARY MATERIALS
Information related to and supportive of the main
text, but of secondary importance, may be
contained in an appendix
  • Includes
  • Extensive statistical analysis
  • Supplementary mathematical analysis
  • Additional data
  • Video data

Will be available online when the manuscript is
published
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Language
  • Journal editors, overloaded with quality
    manuscripts, may make decisions on manuscripts
    based on formal criteria, like grammar or
    spelling. Don't get rejected for avoidable
    mistakes make sure your manuscript looks perfect

--Arnout Jacobs, Elsevier Publishing
Thus, both the science and the language need to
be sound
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The three Cs
Good writing possesses the following three Cs
  • Clarity
  • Conciseness
  • Correctness (accuracy)

The key is to be as brief and specific as
possible without omitting essential details
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Know the enemy
Good writing avoids the following traps
  • Repetition
  • Redundancy
  • Ambiguity
  • Exaggeration

These are common annoyances for editors
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Repetition and Redundancy
Vary the sentences used when writing the abstract
or describing findings at the end of the
introduction Dont copy from other sections
verbatim!
Avoid words with the same meaning In addition, a
systematic analysis of the data was also
presented After statistical analysis of the
data, the methods were then modified Avoid
using the same descriptive word twice in one
sentence In this paper, a simple methodology for
classifying simple composite wastes has been
proposed.
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Repetition and Redundancy
Avoid circular sentences In order to compare
the differences in the two analytical methods,
the dependent variable was set to concentration,
in order to determine if changes had occurred.
The reason for the experiment is described twice,
in slightly different terms
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Ambiguity
Ensure correct use commas and hyphens
Calcium regulated transcription has a different
meaning from Calcium-regulated
transcription In To identify biomarkers of
prostate cancer, we performed microarray
analysis, using custom cDNA arrays The second
comma should be deleted
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Ambiguity
Ensure correct use of which
In Data were normalised to the internal
reference housekeeping gene actin, which showed
The which is used incorrectly, referring to
actin rather than to the normalisation of
data Data were normalised to the internal
reference housekeeping gene actin, revealing
that is correct
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Ambiguity
  • Semi-colons are used in place of periods to
    separate two parallel sentences. They do not take
    the place of a comma or colon.
  • The data and information were grouped into
    four broad classes mainly based on the
    constituent chemicals in the waste stream,
    namely the physiochemical properties, toxicity
    effects, exposure potency and waste quantity.
  • The data and information were grouped into
    four broad classes mainly based on the
    constituent chemicals in the waste stream. The
    classes included the physiochemical properties,
    toxicity effects, exposure potency and waste
    quantity.

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Exaggeration
There was a massive decrease in the number of
tumors following p.o. administration of green tea
Beware of exaggeration but do indicate
significance
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Other common traps
Inconsistent tense dont mix tenses in the same
sentence Before tumors were microdissected,
epithelial cells are Inconsistent use of plural
or singular In eight patients, a biopsy from the
affected sites of the head and neck was
performed In eight patients, biopsies from the
affected sites of the head and neck were
performed
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Other common traps
  • Unbalanced sentences make sure the clauses
    either side of compared with match up
  • Expression levels of p53 in smokers were compared
    with non-smokers
  • Expression levels of p53 in smokers were compared
    with those in non-smokers

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Other common traps
Incorrect use of respectively two corresponding
lists are required The proportions of various
monocyte surface markers were 45, 63 and 70,
respectively The proportions of monocytes
positive for CD163, CD7 and CD11a were 45, 63
and 70, respectively
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Other common traps
  • Incorrect use of etc. / and so on
  • The two groups of data were compared using a
    variety of statistical methods including a
    t-test, chi squared analysis, etc.
  • It is important here to define the tests used
    as they are particular to the paper, not part of
    a natural series and not obvious to the reader.

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Other common traps
  • Overuse of etc. / and so on
  • By comparison with results found in the
    literature, such as those presented by MacDonald
    et al. (2003), Smith (2005), Burns (2006), and so
    on, the consequences presented here show a
    similar trend.
  • The use of etc. and and so on should be
    minimized in a manuscript and, whenever possible,
    a full series of examples should be provided,
    particularly when referencing the literature

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Language Editing Services
Your manuscript is precious, invest in it
  • Specialist scientific and medical editing
    services are commercially available to polish the
    language in your manuscript prior to journal
    submission
  • Rates start from 8 per page

More information can be found on the
Elsevier website at http//www.elsevier.com/wps/f
ind/authorsview.authors/languagepolishing
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Language Editing Services
Recommended companies include - Edanz
Editing - Liwen Bianji - International Science
Editing - Asia Science Editing - SPI Publisher
Services - Diacritech Language Editing
Service Use of an English-language editing
service listed here is not mandatory, and will
NOT GUARANTEE acceptance for publication in
Elsevier journals
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Technical details
  • Layout
  • Length
  • Abbreviation

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Layout
  • Keep line spacing, font and font size
    consistent throughout double-spaced 12-point
    Times New Roman is preferred
  • Use consistent heading styles throughout and
    no more than three levels of headings
  • Number the pages
  • Number lines if journal requires check the
    GUIDE FOR AUTHORS
  • Order and title sections as instructed in the
    GUIDE FOR AUTHORS Figure and Table sections are
    normally together following References

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Length
25-30 pages is the ideal length for a submitted
manuscript, including ESSENTIAL data only Julian
Eastoe, Co-editor, Journal of Colloid and
Interface Science
Consult the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS for word and
graphic limits Letters or short communications
have stricter limits on the length. For example,
3000 words with no more than five illustrations
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Abbreviation
  • Define non-standard abbreviations on first use in
    both the abstract and the main text
  • Check the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS for a list of
    standard abbreviations that dont need defining
  • Dont abbreviate terms used only once or twice in
    the entire manuscript spell these out in full
  • Acronyms capitals not required in the definition
    unless a proper noun or start of a sentence
  • ubiquitin proteasome system (UPS)
  • NOT
  • Ubiquitin Proteasome System (UPS)

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Cover letter
  • This is your chance to speak to the editor
    directly
  • Keep it brief, but convey the particular
    importance of your manuscript to the journal
  • This is your opportunity to convince the
    journal editor that they should publish your
    study, so it is worth investing time at this stage

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Cover letter
  • Include
  • Editor name Address to journal editor, not
    generic
  • First sentence provide title, author list and
    journal name
  • Briefly describe
  • your research area and track record
  • the main findings of your research
  • the significance of your research
  • Tips
  • Confirm the originality of the submission and
    what your purpose is.
  • Mention what would make your manuscript
    worthwhile to the journal.
  • DO NOT summarize your manuscript, or repeat the
    abstract.
  • State the final approval of all co-authors as
    well as if your manuscript has been previously
    rejected.
  • Mention other special requirements such as
    conflicts of interest
  • Suggested reviewers, people who should not review.

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What to do when you finish a paper?
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Final checks
Revision before submission can prevent early
rejection What can I do to ensure my paper is in
the best possible state prior to submission?
  • Ask colleagues to take a look and be critical.
  • Check that everything meets the requirements
    set out in the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS again!
  • Check that the scope of the paper is
    appropriate for the selected journal change
    journal rather than submit inappropriately.

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Post-referee revision
Carefully study the reviewers comments and
prepare a detailed letter of response
  • Respond to all points even if you disagree
    with a reviewer, provide a polite, scientifically
    solid rebuttal rather than ignore their comment
  • Provide page and line numbers when referring to
    revisions made in the manuscript
  • Perform additional calculations, computations,
    or experiments if required these usually serve
    to make the final paper stronger

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Post-referee revision
The reviewer is clearly ignorant of the work of
Bonifaci et al. (2008) showing that the electric
field strength in the ionization zone of the
burned corona is less than the space charge free
field before the corona onset. Thank you for
your comment. However, we feel that the
assumption in our model is supported by recent
work by Bonifaci et al. (2008), who showed that
the electric field strength in the ionization
zone of the burned corona is less than the space
charge free field before the corona onset.
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Post-referee revision
  • State specifically what changes you have made
    to address the reviewers comments, mentioning
    the page and line numbers where changes have been
    made
  • Avoid repeating the same response over and
    over if a similar comment is made by multiple
    people explain your position once and refer back
    to your earlier response in responses to other
    reviewers or the editor

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Post-referee revision
Clearly differentiate responses from reviewers
comments by using a different font style
Reviewers Comments It would also be good to
acknowledge that geographic routing as you
describe it is not a complete routing solution
for wireless networks, except for applications
that address a region rather than a particular
node. Routing between nodes requires further
machinery, which detracts from the benefits of
geographic routing, and which I don't believe you
have made practical. Authors reply We
agree and will add an appropriate caveat. Note
that for data-centric storage (name-based
exact-match and range queries for sensed events),
the storage and query processing mechanisms
"natively" address packets geographically
without a "node-to-location" database.
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Accepting rejection
Dont take it personally!
  • Try to understand why the paper has been
    rejected
  • Evaluate honestly will your paper meet the
    journals requirements with the addition of more
    data or is another journal more appropriate?
  • Dont resubmit elsewhere without significant
    revisions addressing the reasons for rejection
    and checking the new GUIDE FOR AUTHORS.

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Accepting rejection
  • Suggested strategy for submitting elsewhere
  • In your cover letter, declare that the paper
    was rejected and name the journal
  • Include the referees reports and show how
    each comment has been addressed
  • Explain why you are submitting the paper to
    this journal is it a more appropriate journal?

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  • Ethical Issues

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Unethical behavior can earn rejection and even a
ban from publishing in the journal Terry M.
Phillips, Editor, Journal of Chromatography B
  • Unethical behavior includes
  • Multiple submissions
  • Redundant publications
  • Plagiarism
  • Data fabrication and falsification
  • Improper use of human subjects and animals in
    research
  • Improper author contribution

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Multiple submissions
Multiple submissions save your time but waste
editors The editorial process of your
manuscripts will be completely stopped if the
duplicated submissions are discovered. It is
considered to be unethicalWe have thrown out a
paper when an author was caught doing this. I
believe that the other journal did the same
thing James C. Hower, Editor, International
Journal of Coal Geology
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Multiple submissions
Competing journals constantly exchange
information on suspicious papers You should not
send your manuscripts to a second journal UNTIL
you receive the final decision of the first
journal DONT DO IT!!
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Multiple submissions
An author should not submit for consideration in
another journal a previously published paper
  • Published studies do not need to be repeated
    unless further confirmation is required
  • Previous publication of an abstract during the
    proceedings of conferences does not preclude
    subsequent submission for publication, but full
    disclosure should be made at the time of
    submission

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Redundant publication
  • Re-publication of a paper in another language
    is acceptable, provided that there is full and
    prominent disclosure of its original source at
    the time of submission
  • At the time of submission, authors should
    disclose details of related papers, even if in a
    different language, and similar papers in press

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Plagiarism
Plagiarism is the appropriation of another
persons ideas, processes, results, or words
without giving appropriate credit, including
those obtained through confidential review of
others research proposals and manuscripts
Federal Office of Science and Technology Policy,
1999
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Plagiarism
Presenting the data or interpretations of others
without crediting them, and thereby gaining for
yourself the rewards earned by others, is theft,
and it eliminates the motivation of working
scientists to generate new data and
interpretations Bruce Railsback, Professor,
Department of Geology, University of Georgia
For more information on plagiarism and
self-plagiarism, please see http//facpub.stjohns
.edu/roigm/plagiarism/
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Plagiarism
Plagiarism is a serious offence that could lead
to paper rejection, academic charges and
termination of employment. It will seriously
affect your scientific reputation. DONT DO
IT! Unacceptable paraphrasing, even with correct
citation, is considered plagiarism
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Paraphrasing
  • Original (Gratz, 1982)
  • Bilateral vagotomy resulted in an increase in
    tidal volume but a depression in respiratory
    frequency such that total ventilation did not
    change.
  • Restatement 1
  • Gratz (1982) showed that bilateral vagotomy
    resulted in an increase in tidal volume but a
    depression in respiratory frequency such that
    total ventilation did not change.

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Paraphrasing
  • Original (Buchanan, 1996)
  • What makes intentionally killing a human
    being a moral wrong for which the killer is to be
    condemned is that the killer did this morally bad
    thing not inadvertently or even negligently, but
    with a conscious purpose with eyes open and a
    will directed toward that very object.
  • Restatement 2
  • Buchanan (1996) states that we condemn a
    person who intentionally kills a human being
    because he did a "morally bad thing" not through
    negligence or accident but with open eyes and a
    direct will to take that life.

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Data fabrication and falsification
  • Fabrication is making up data or results, and
    recording or reporting them
  • Falsification is manipulating research materials,
    equipment, processes or changing / omitting data
    or results such that the research is not
    accurately represented in the research record
  • The most dangerous of all falsehoods is a
    slightly distorted truth
  • G.C. Lichtenberg
    (17421799)

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Unethical research
  • Experiments on human subjects or animals should
    follow related ethical standards, namely, the
    Helsinki Declaration of 1975, as revised in 2000
    (5)
  • If doubt exists concerning the compliance of the
    research with the Helsinki Declaration, authors
    must explain the rationale for their approach and
    demonstrate approval from the institutional
    review body

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Improper author contribution
  • Authorship credit should be based on
  • Substantial contributions to conception and
    design, or acquisition of data, or analysis and
    interpretation of data
  • Drafting the article or revising it critically
    for important intellectual content
  • Final approval of the version to be published
  • Authors should meet conditions 1, 2, and 3.
    Those who have participated in certain
    substantive aspects of the research project
    should be acknowledged or listed as contributors.
    Check the GUIDE FOR AUTHORS and ICMJE
    (International Committee of Medical Journal
    Editors) guidelines http//www.icmje.org/

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  • Conclusion
  • Getting Accepted

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Publishers do want quality
  • WANTED
  • Originality
  • Significant advances in field
  • Appropriate methods, case studies and conclusions
  • Readability
  • Studies that meet ethical standards
  • NOT WANTED
  • Duplications
  • Reports of no scientific interest
  • Work out of date
  • Inappropriate/incomplete methods or conclusions
  • Studies with insufficient data

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Summary
  • Look back and think it over before you start
    writing a paper
  • White it in a proper way
  • IMRAD
  • Good Language
  • Watch details (Guide for Authors)
  • Write a cover letter
  • Check you paper when you finish it.
  • Revise the paper / Accept rejection
  • Behave in an ethical way

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A book may be helpful
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Thank you! Questions?
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