Unit Six : Double Check for Faulty Comparisons and Omissions

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Unit Six Double Check for Faulty
Comparisons and Omissions
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• Our algorithm is more accurate with respect to
  computational time.
• Revised Our algorithm is more accurate than
  conventional ones with respect to computational
  time.

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• The chemistry department cooperates with local
  industry more than their department.
• Revised The chemistry department cooperates
  with local industry more than their department
  does.

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• The novel material is as strong, if not stronger
  than, available ones.
• Revised The novel material is as strong as, if
  not stronger than, available ones.

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• The research department's productivity is higher
  than the administrative division.
• Revised The research department's productivity
  is higher than that of the administrative
  division.

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• The two step-procedure assumes that the sample
  standard deviation is proportional the sample
  mean.
• Revised The two step-procedure assumes that
  the sample standard deviation is proportional to
  the sample mean.

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• The novel material described herein has a higher
  withstanding temperature.
• Revised The novel material described herein
  has a higher withstanding temperature than other
  materials.

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• The university stresses discipline more than the
  institute.
• Revised The university stresses discipline more
  than the institute does.

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• The peak is as high, if not higher than, other
  ones.
• Revised The peak is as high as, if not higher
  than, other ones.

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• The form of the fitting function should be
  defined in advance adopt the regression method.
• Revised The form of the fitting function
  should be defined in advance to adopt the
  regression method.

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• The trade school's dropout rate is lower than the
  university.
• Revised The trade school's dropout rate is
  lower than that of the university.