much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain

1
much depends on weather your effected by the high
altitude when you climbed the mountain

• Much depends on whether youre affected by the
  high altitude when you climb the mountain.

2
while half the class uses the Internet the rest
will study the smithsonian magazine that are
different than the ones we used earlier

• While half the class uses the Internet, the rest
  will study the Smithsonian magazines that are
  different from the ones we used earlier.

3
oh we havent got finished with our group book
report the reason is because everyone dont have a
copy of maries draft

• Oh, we havent finished our group book report
  because everyone doesnt have a copy of Maries
  draft.

4
since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone
river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming

• My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River,
  hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

5
there are some athletes who rarely play but
continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal
stated

• Some athletes who rarely play continue to
  practice, Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.

6
the world series although often exciting
sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we
think

• The World Series, although often exciting,
  sometimes is too slow paced for my mom and me.

7
ms paula jefferscampton paper company18376
river driveminneapolis mndear ms jeffers

• Ms. Paula Jeffers
• Campton Paper Company
• 18376 River Drive
• Minneapolis, MN 55400
• Dear Ms. Jeffers

8
because the united states constitution sits out
certain individual writes that we is all
priviledged too enjoy

• The United States Constitution sets out certain
  individual rights that we are all privileged to
  enjoy.

9
we havent neither the time or the ability to
practice the play the reason being we lost so
many actors to the flew

• We have neither the time nor the ability to
  practice the play because so many actors have the
  flu.