Find Credible Quotes

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Finding Credible Opinions
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Example of a working thesis School uniforms
will benefit the educational process.

• In your pre-writing organizers, avoid using
  quotes like this
• For me, it helps, especially when I have two
  children at home, and I dont have to spend extra
  dollars to have different outfits for them, she
  said.

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Find More Credible Research

• Which opinion is more credible/professional?
• For me, it helps, especially when I have two
  children at home, and I dont have to spend extra
  dollars to have different outfits for them, she
  said.
• Or
• Since weve installed a new uniform policy, our
  disciplinary referrals have been reduced by 30,
  he said.

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Give he or she a professional title!!

• Since weve installed a new uniform policy, our
  disciplinary referrals have been reduced by 30,
  he said (Richard Jackson, Principal of West
  Morris High School in NJ).
• In the paper, you might use the quote like this
• Richard Jackson, the Principal of West Morris
  High School in NJ, has documented the benefits of
  school uniforms Since weve installed a new
  uniform policy, our disciplinary referrals have
  been reduced by 30.

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Go back and limit your opinionsgo find studies
and statements that prove your thesis!

• According to a 2010 study by the New Jersey
  Department of Education, schools that have
  adopted a school uniform policy also noticed an
  increase in test scores.
• A Duke University study found that There has
  been a significant correlation between a
  students increased self-esteem and school
  uniforms.