Pat's poor presentation

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• This is a presentation made by an imaginary
  student to describe themselves.
• As you watch the presentation think about the
  following
• What have I learnt about Pat?
• What other information would I like to know about
  Pat that is not in the presentation?

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About me

• By Pat

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My name is Pat Smith

• I live at 45 West street in Newtown by the post
  office in a house with a blue door and three
  bedrooms
• My mum works for the post office and goes to work
  very early every day and I have to get breakfast
  for Jane
• My best friend likes football and chips and his
  dads car and going to his nans house on sundays
  except when Jamie is there because shes always
  getting everyone into trouble

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My family

• My dad lives in Spain
• My sister is younger than me and is a pain in the
  neck
• We have got three cats called Tommy fred and
  tibbs
• We got our dog from the rescue centre because he
  had been abadoned

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Hobbies

• Football
• Tele

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School

• I liked my last school
• Miss jones was great but mr best was horrid and
  he got cross when I talked
• I liked maths but not history or geography
• My school was near here, just round the corner

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The end
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Think about the following

• Why do you think Pat did not include some of the
  things you would like to know?
• Was the information easy to understand?
• Was there too much or too little information on
  the slides?
• Did the presentation have a clear beginning,
  middle and end?
• Were the spelling and grammar correct?

View presentation again
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• How could Pat have improved the information in
  the presentation?
• What impression do you have of Pat at this stage?
  Summarise
• - what you are sure about
• - what the presentation leads you to think, and
  why.